Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

[hybridkamal]

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

@ehsan

Mohsin Naqvi ka koi kalaam pasand hai?

hehehe, abhi mein mohsin naqvi kou hi soch rahaa thaa....

[tarash]

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

@hybridkamal

hehehe, abhi mein mohsin naqvi kou hi soch rahaa thaa....

post karein na mohsin Naqvi ko

[hybridkamal]

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

@tarash

post karein na mohsin Naqvi ko

kar doon gaa koi jaldi tou hai nahin

[muqawwee123]

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

@hybridkamal

Aap ki yaad aati rahi raat bhar chashm-e-namm muskuraati rahi raat bhar

raat bhar dard ki shamma jalti rahi gham ki lou thartharaati rahi raat bhar

bansuri ki sureeli suhaani sadaa yaad ban ban key aati rahi raat bhar

yaad key chaand dil mein utartey rahey chaandani jagmagaati rahi raat bhar

koi deewana galiyoun mein phirta rahaa koi aawaaz aati rahi raat bhar

(Makhdoom Mohiuddin)

which one is your favorite shair in this ghazal. If Abida Parveen hadn't sung it, I found this quite ordinary ghazal, which may not attract readers.

[muqawwee123]

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

@tarash

post karein na mohsin Naqvi ko

aap select kar len... iske baad aap ki bari hai

[hybridkamal]

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

which one is your favorite shair in this ghazal. If Abida Parveen hadn't sung it, I found this quite ordinary ghazal, which may not attract readers.

not one couplet the whole ghazal is mine favourite and also faiz Ahmed faiz's version.

[hybridkamal]

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

qadr-e-jouhar hai jou pindaar samait
mujh kou parkhou merey maya'ar samait

roaz maangein yeh dua khaana badosh
ghar naa ujrey dar-o-deewaar samait

kitni banjar hui fasl-e-aawaaz
shehar chup chaap hai bazaar samait

kaash logoun ki tarhan sooey chaman
hum bhi jaayein kabhi dildaar samait

koun karta qad-o-qaamat kaa hisaab?
ik qayaamat thaa woh raftaar samait

jinn ki haibat sey hiraasaaN lashkar
be-nishaan ab hein woh talwaar samait

bujh jaayein kahin aakhein meri
yaad aa, mash'al-e-rukhsaar samait

khaak uRti hui sadiyoun se idhar
qaafley gumm huey saalaar samait

hawas-e-darham-o-deenaar ki khair
loag bikney lagey kirdaar samait

Mein key Mohsin hoon shaheed-e-naamoos
dafan karnaa mujhey dastaar samait

(Mohsin Naqvi)

[ehsan]

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

@hybridkamal

qadr-e-jouhar hai jou pindaar samait
mujh kou parkhou merey maya’ar samait

roaz maangein yeh dua khaana badosh
ghar naa ujrey dar-o-deewaar samait

kitni banjar hui fasl-e-aawaaz
shehar chup chaap hai bazaar samait

kaash logoun ki tarhan sooey chaman
hum bhi jaayein kabhi dildaar samait

koun karta qad-o-qaamat kaa hisaab?
ik qayaamat thaa woh raftaar samait

jinn ki haibat sey hiraasaaN lashkar
be-nishaan ab hein woh talwaar samait

bujh jaayein kahin aakhein meri
yaad aa, mash’al-e-rukhsaar samait

khaak uRti hui sadiyoun se idhar
qaafley gumm huey saalaar samait

hawas-e-darhom-o-deenaar ki khair
loag bikney lagey kirdaay samait

Mein key Mohsin hoon shaheed-e-naamoos
dafan karnaa mujhey dastaar samait

(Mohsin Naqvi)

wah wah, one of my favourites. I read this on the local radio here sometime ago.

[muqawwee123]

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

@hybridkamal

qadr-e-jouhar hai jou pindaar samait
mujh kou parkhou merey maya’ar samait

roaz maangein yeh dua khaana badosh
ghar naa ujrey dar-o-deewaar samait

kitni banjar hui fasl-e-aawaaz
shehar chup chaap hai bazaar samait

kaash logoun ki tarhan sooey chaman
hum bhi jaayein kabhi dildaar samait

koun karta qad-o-qaamat kaa hisaab?
ik qayaamat thaa woh raftaar samait

jinn ki haibat sey hiraasaaN lashkar
be-nishaan ab hein woh talwaar samait

bujh jaayein kahin aakhein meri
yaad aa, mash’al-e-rukhsaar samait

khaak uRti hui sadiyoun se idhar
qaafley gumm huey saalaar samait

hawas-e-darhom-o-deenaar ki khair
loag bikney lagey kirdaay samait

Mein key Mohsin hoon shaheed-e-naamoos
dafan karnaa mujhey dastaar samait

(Mohsin Naqvi)

kisi khatoon ka kalam pasand nahin?

[ehsan]

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

@muqawwee123

kisi khatoon ka kalam pasand nahin?

aa gaye na Parveen Shakir per.

[hybridkamal]

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

@muqawwee123

kisi khatoon ka kalam pasand nahin?

khawateen kaa kalam bhi pasand hai like ada jaffri, zohra nigah, parveen shakir lakin meri top ten list mein nahin hai inn kaa koi kalaam, afsaana/noverl nigaari mein ziaada pasand hein khawateen like bano qudsia, quratalain haider, ismat chughtai, khadija mastoor etc.

[khubsoorat]

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

@hybridkamal

Aap ki yaad aati rahi raat bhar
chashm-e-namm muskuraati rahi raat bhar

raat bhar dard ki shamma jalti rahi
gham ki lou thartharaati rahi raat bhar

bansuri ki sureeli suhaani sadaa
yaad ban ban key aati rahi raat bhar

yaad key chaand dil mein utartey rahey
chaandani jagmagaati rahi raat bhar

koi deewana galiyoun mein phirta rahaa
koi aawaaz aati rahi raat bhar

(Makhdoom Mohiuddin)

beautiful :k:

[hybridkamal]

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

@khubsoorat

beautiful :k:

thanks…

[muqawwee123]

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

@ehsan

aa gaye na Parveen Shakir per.

Fakhira bhool gaye aap?

[hybridkamal]

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

Naa junooN raha naa pari rahi

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naa tou tu rahaa, naa tou meiN raha, jou rahi sou be-khabri rahi

shah-e-be-khudi ney ataa kiyaa mujhey ab libaas-e-barhanagi
naa khirad ki bakyagari rahi, naa junooN ki parda-daari rahi

chali samt-e-ghaib sey ik hawaa key chaman zahoor kaa jal gayaa
magar aik shaakh-e-nihaal-e-gham, jisey dil kahein sou hari rahi

nazar-e-taghaaful-e-yaar kaa, gilaa kis zubaaN sey bayaaN karuN
key sharaab-e-sad qadah aarzu, kham-e-dil meiN thi sou bhari rahi

woh ajab ghaRi thi key jis ghaRi liyaa, dars nuskha-e-ishq kaa
key kitaab aqal ki taaq meiN, jyuN dhari thi, tyuN hi dhari rahi

terey josh-e-hairat-e-husn kaa, asar iss qadar sou ayaaN huaa
key naa aainey mein jilaa rahi, naa pari kooN jalwa gari rahi

kiyaa khaak aatish-e-ishq ney dil-e-be-navaa-e-siraaj kooN
naa khatar rahaa, naa hazar rahaa, magar aik be-khatri rahi

(Siraaj Aurangaabadi)

[hybridkamal]

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

kisi aur gham mein itni khalish nihaaN nahiN hai
gham-e-dil merey rafiqouN! gham-e-raayegaaN nahiN hai

koi hum-nafas nahiN hai koi raaz-daaN nahiN hai
faqat aik dil thaa ab tak sou woh mehrbaaN nahiN hai

meri rooh ki haqeeqat merey aansuoN sey poochou
meraa majlisi tabassum meraa tarjumaaN nahiN hai

kisi aankh kou sadaa dou, kisi zulf kou pukaaro
baRi dhoop paR rahi hai koi saayebaaN nahiN hai

inhi pathrouN pai chal kar agar aa sako tou aao
merey ghar key raastey mein koi kehkashaaN nahiN hai

(Mustafa zaidi)

[muqawwee123]

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

chali samt-e-ghaib sey ik hawaa key chaman zahoor kaa jal gayaa
magar aik shaakh-e-nihaal-e-gham, jisey dil kahein sou hari rahi

[muqawwee123]

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

kisi aur gham mein itni khalish nihaaN nahiN hai gham-e-dil merey rafiqouN! gham-e-raayegaaN nahiN hai

koi hum-nafas nahiN hai koi raaz-daaN nahiN hai faqat aik dil thaa ab tak sou woh mehrbaaN nahiN hai

meri rooh ki haqeeqat merey aansuoN sey poochou meraa majlisi tabassum meraa tarjumaaN nahiN hai

kisi aankh kou sadaa dou, kisi zulf kou pukaaro baRi dhoop paR rahi hai koi saayebaaN nahiN hai

inhi pathrouN pai chal kar agar aa sako tou aao merey ghar key raastey mein koi kehkashaaN nahiN hai

(Mustafa zaidi)

my favorite as well

[ehsan]

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

meri rooh ki haqeeqat merey aansuoN sey poochou
meraa majlisi tabassum meraa tarjumaaN nahiN hai

[hybridkamal]

Re: Meri Pasand ki 10 Ghazlen / Nazmen (hybridkamal)

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Woh jou hum meiN tum meiN qaraar thaa, tumheiN yaad hou key naa yaad hou
Wohi yaani Waada Nibaah kaa tumheiN yaad hou key naa yaad hou

Woh jou Lutf mujh pey thay peshtar, Woh karam key thaa merey haal par
Mujhey sab haey yaad zara zara tumheiN yaad hou key naa yaad hou

Woh Naye giley Woh shikaayateiN, Woh mazey mazey ki hikaayateiN
Woh har aik baat pey ruthana tumheiN yaad hou key naa yaad hou

Kabhi Baithey sab meiN jo Ru-baroo, tou IshaarouN hi sey Guftugu
Woh BayaaN Shauq kaa Baramalaa tumheiN yaad hou key naa yaad hou

Huey Ittefaaq sey gar baham, tou Wafaa jataaney kou dam-ba-dam
Gilaa-e-malaamat-e-Aqrabaa tumheiN yaad hou key naa yaad hou

Koi baat aisi agar hui key tumhaarey jii kou burii lagi
Tou bayaaN sey pehlay hi bhoolnaa tumheiN yaad hou key naa yaad hou

Kabhi hum meiN tum meiN bhi chaah thi, kabhi hum sey tum sey bhi Raah thi
Kabhi hum bhi tum bhi thay aashnaa tumheiN yaad hou key naa yaad hou

Suno zikr hai kai saal kaa, key kiya ik waada aap ney thaa
sou nibaahane kaa tou zikr kiya tumheiN yaad ho k na yaad ho

Woh Bigarnaa Wasl ki Raat kaa, woh naa maannaa kisi Baat kaa
Woh nahiN nahiN ki har aaN Adaa tumheiN yaad hou key naa yaad hou

Jisey Aap gintey thay aashnaa, Jisey aap kehaty thay ba-wafaa
MeiN Wohi huN Momin-e-Mubtala tumheiN yaad hou key naa yaad hou

(Momin khan Momin)