**meri khamoshi ko woh meri khataa kehta hai
kitna nadaan hai wafaoon ko jafa kehta hai
woh ke anjaan e mohabbat hai usay kiya kahiye
dil ke rone ko wo dharkan ki sada kehta hai
mai usay kitna bhi chahoon per nahi us pe asar
meri diwaangi ko apna huner kehta hai
yaan to awaaz uthaane ki saza maut hi hai
tum bhi maano wohi jo hakim-e-waqt kehta hai
bus woh aaghaaz e mohabat ke chaand lamhe hain yaad
jin ko woh larakpan ki khataa kehta hai…!**
Re: meri khamoshi ko woh meri khataa kehta hai......
***ghazal ki nasar achi hey....leakin beach main aap ney rhidum toor dia
or qafia bhe correct nhe... like..shear yun hona chahiey.....................
main usay kitna bhe chahoon per us pey nhe asr
meree diwangi ko bhe wo meree ada kehta hai...
or........
yhaan tu awaaz uthaaney ki saza militi hey
tum bhe manoo jo waqt-e-khuda kehta hai
Re: meri khamoshi ko woh meri khataa kehta hai......
***ghazal ki nasar achi hey....leakin beach main aap ney rhidum toor dia or qafia bhe correct nhe... like..shear yun hona chahiey.....................
main usay kitna bhe chahoon per us pey nhe asr meree diwangi ko bhe wo meree ada kehta hai... or........
yhaan tu awaaz uthaaney ki saza militi hey tum bhe manoo jo waqt-e-khuda kehta hai
waqt-e-khuda????????
Re: meri khamoshi ko woh meri khataa kehta hai......
***ghazal ki nasar achi hey....leakin beach main aap ney rhidum toor dia or qafia bhe correct nhe... like..shear yun hona chahiey.....................
main usay kitna bhe chahoon per us pey nhe asr meree diwangi ko bhe wo meree ada kehta hai... or........
yhaan tu awaaz uthaaney ki saza militi hey tum bhe manoo jo waqt-e-khuda kehta hai
SHAH G.........main sha`ir nhi hon.........
Apni pasand ki poetry share krta hon yahan.........bas
Re: meri khamoshi ko woh meri khataa kehta hai…
**yaan to awaaz uthaane ki saza maut hi hai
tum bhi maano wohi jo hakim-e-waqt kehta hai
Western Media is playing role of Hakim e Waqt
**
Re: meri khamoshi ko woh meri khataa kehta hai…
Re: meri khamoshi ko woh meri khataa kehta hai…
Moqa kon fraham kr raha hy…?
apny hi log na…?
Re: meri khamoshi ko woh meri khataa kehta hai......
Moqa kon fraham kr raha hy........? apny hi log na.........?
bilkul hamari kamzorian moqa fraham karti hain
Re: meri khamoshi ko woh meri khataa kehta hai......
Moqa kon fraham kr raha hy........? apny hi log na.........?
apne hi girate hain nasheman pe bijliyan
Re: meri khamoshi ko woh meri khataa kehta hai......
apne hi girate hain nasheman pe bijliyan
yeh shehr Pakistan mein fit nahi aat,yahan to bijli hi nahi,bijliyan kahan se aein ge
Re: meri khamoshi ko woh meri khataa kehta hai......
yeh shehr Pakistan mein fit nahi aat,yahan to bijli hi nahi,bijliyan kahan se aein ge
aap ne shayad Meera aur Veena Malik ka naam nahin suna..... Shehr e Na muraad ki bijliyan