JonyBr
December 12, 2003, 8:05pm
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Meri har taqreer, meri har tehreer,
kerti hai bayaan, teri haseen tasveer
karoon koi tadbeer, ya koi raasta,
rahon ga teray, sahar-e-husn ka aseer
ab tu meri taqdeer, badal si gai hai
ab mray shahr-e-dil ka, koi aur hai ameer
kitni umda hai tafsir, tray chehra-e-kitab ki
jo dekhta hai, kerdeti ussay hai taskheer
nahin koi jageer, na khazana-e-dunia chahiye
teri chahat jo milay, ban jaon aalamgeer
ye kesi hai taizeer, kia gunah hai Atif
us ko chahna bhi, ho gaya hai taqseer.
16th June 1997.
Re: Meri har taqreer, meri har tehreer
*Originally posted by JonyBr: *
Meri har taqreer, meri har tehreer,
kerti hai bayaan, teri haseen tasveer
karoon koi tadbeer, ya koi raasta,
rahon ga teray, sahar-e-husn ka aseer
ab tu meri taqdeer, badal si gai hai
ab mray shahr-e-dil ka, koi aur hai ameer
kitni umda hai tafsir, tray chehra-e-kitab ki
jo dekhta hai, kerdeti ussay hai taskheer
nahin koi jageer, na khazana-e-dunia chahiye
teri chahat jo milay, ban jaon aalamgeer
ye kesi hai taizeer, kia gunah hai Atif
us ko chahna bhi, ho gaya hai taqseer.
16th June 1997.
this one is beautiful too:k:
and whats with 1997:-|
anyways thanx:-)
Oh great Atif… Thanks for sharing it with us .. Its lovely having a great depth of love.. :k:
riva
December 14, 2003, 5:34pm
8
Re: Meri har taqreer, meri har tehreer
*Originally posted by JonyBr: *
Meri har taqreer, meri har tehreer,
kerti hai bayaan, teri haseen tasveer
karoon koi tadbeer, ya koi raasta,
rahon ga teray, sahar-e-husn ka aseer
ab tu meri taqdeer, badal si gai hai
ab mray shahr-e-dil ka, koi aur hai ameer
kitni umda hai tafsir, tray chehra-e-kitab ki
jo dekhta hai, kerdeti ussay hai taskheer
nahin koi jageer, na khazana-e-dunia chahiye
teri chahat jo milay, ban jaon aalamgeer
ye kesi hai taizeer, kia gunah hai Atif
us ko chahna bhi, ho gaya hai taqseer.
16th June 1997.
i think kay yaa poetry aap ki aapni nahi hai.
JonyBr
December 15, 2003, 8:48pm
9
^ Oki then why dont u increase my GK with whos peice of writing it is ? tell me the name, book, page number etc …if u cant tu come over & i will hand u a 7 yr old copy & u can run the tests of inc, pages & writing being years old
riva
December 16, 2003, 3:02am
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*Originally posted by JonyBr: *
^ Oki then why dont u increase my GK with whos peice of writing it is ? tell me the name, book, page number etc …if u cant tu come over & i will hand u a 7 yr old copy & u can run the tests of inc, pages & writing being years old
ooh Dear aap nay to bura hi maan liya. hum to is liay kah rahay thay kay itni achi poetry ko poet hi kar sakta hai. sorry for that je