Meri ghazal ..apki raey ki muntazir

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Assalam o Alaikum ,
Mra naam Ahsan hai and I m a new commer in gupshup. I am doing (B.S.) from FAST aur shaairi bhi karta hoon. meri aik ghazal paish e khidmat hai …

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            Wafa ki raah me yeh soch kar qadam rakhna
            MuhabbatoN  mey  kabhi  waapsi   nahi   hoti

            Hua hai youN to charaghaaN humari mehfil me
            Teray  baghair   magar   roshni   nahi   hoti  

            Bohat khuloos se miltay hein hum se loag magar
            Tumhaaray  baad koi  dosti  nahi hoti 

            Mai tum ko chaandni raatoN me yaad karta hoon 
            ke meray chaand bina chaandni nahi hoti

            Hazaar baar yeh dil soch soch ghabraaya  
            keh tum na hotay to kya zindagi meri hoti

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i wait for your comments and sugestiion

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toota sapna
aapka apna
ahsan subhan ahsan

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Re: Meri ghazal ..apki raey ki muntazir

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*Originally posted by ahsan225: *
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Assalam o Alaikum ,
Mra naam Ahsan hai and I m a new commer in gupshup. I am doing (B.S.) from FAST aur shaairi bhi karta hoon. meri aik ghazal paish e khidmat hai …

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            Wafa ki raah me yeh soch kar qadam rakhna
            MuhabbatoN  mey  kabhi  waapsi   nahi   hoti

            Hua hai youN to charaghaaN humari mehfil me
            Teray  baghair   magar   roshni   nahi   hoti  

            Bohat khuloos se miltay hein hum se loag magar
            Tumhaaray  baad koi  dosti  nahi hoti 

            Mai tum ko chaandni raatoN me yaad karta hoon 
            ke meray chaand bina chaandni nahi hoti

            Hazaar baar yeh dil soch soch ghabraaya  
            keh tum na hotay to kya zindagi meri hoti

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Ahsan 225 :k:

khush amdid,.. aap aay our chah gay, jitni bhi tareef ki jay kam hay… umeed hay aap ko pharrnay kay mawaqe miltay rahain gay.

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bahut khoob thanks 4 sharing Brother !!

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beautiful....

and welcome......

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oh to aap lamhay jee kay bhai ho … :k:

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welcome ahsan.....happy-mango-sight ;)
believe me dis a really nice place to be...aap enjoy kro gee..aur haan aate raha kijiye...u'll surely enjoy it..
its just like a home...aap zyaada arsa dour nahin reh sakte...
and haan...
*Hua hai youN to charaghaaN humari mehfil me
Teray baghair magar roshni nahi hoti *
kya khoob kaha hai..wah! keep up the good work:)

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nice :k:

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Bohat khoob Ahsan.. :k::k:

& welcome 2 gs.. :hula:

btw, i like Ahsan name.. :wink:

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keep it up ahsan :k:

n welcome to gupshup

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Wellcoem to GS
and thanks for sharying :flower1:

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Re: Meri ghazal ..apki raey ki muntazir

** toota sapna ** bohat acha likha hia thanks 4 sharin…and keep it up and welcome here..:flower1: