mujh say ajab tu khafa aaya tha.
shayad main tujhay na bhaya tha.
ya mairy khata thi is main
yaa logon nay warghalaya tha
kitna majboor tha main uss waqt
meray is dil nay samjhaya tha
meenh* barsa tha khoob uss din
Qalbe Aasman bhi bhar Aaya tha
Kitna Qareeb tha teray Mahmood
Mera saya bhi tera saaya tha.
*baarish(meenh) you know what i mean
That means “saaya bhi saath jab chor jaye aisi hai tanhai”
Nice ghazal…..
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Keep it up
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Sunate hain keh mil jaati hai har cheez dua se
Ek roz unhain maang ke dekho khuda se
… well .. thats quite a nice start .. hope to see more of your work .. simple .. but to the point
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.. thank you ..
To see a world in a grain of sand
And heaven in a wild flower
Hold affinity in the palm of your hand
And eternity in an hour
well i wrote a few ghazals when i first fell in love..one sided. i am out of it and have not been able to write any. but i have a few more that i will post later on
nice one !
why did u quit writing?
likhtay rahiye..
well, poetry comes to your mind ( i call it in urdu "nazil hoti hai") when you are feeling something, when you are sensitive. I was a little more sensitive at the time..i guess i am americanising with the time... I am becoming a little insensitive..or maybe there are other reasons to it....
Nice...
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Even If You Are Basically Stupid
You Can Still Meet Nice People !
nice!
~~agar kisi sae mohabbat karo to us kae baghair tanhayi main rehna bhi seekho~~
I know,feelings make us more sensitive and they also give us power to express.This is a very nice peice of poetry and I feel you have the germs to write
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Even if you do not feel that sensitive as you used to,I would ask you to not stop writing ,as its a skill and not everyone is blessed with it
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keep it up!