Meri dilrubaa meri baat maan, koi dard nahiN hai la dava

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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pichhle dino kuchh busy tha. ab jaake kuchh waqt mila hai. soncha apnii ye naii koshish aap logon se share karein…always looking for your valuable comment

Meri dilrubaa meri baat maan, koi dard nahiN hai la dava
Gar chaaragar pe yakeeN ho, khud ban jaaye marz apni dava

Mere dil se tere dard tak , jo ye eik khaloos ki lakeer hai
Oose waqt ki raza pe chhod de, na apne haath se khud mita

Tere ishq pe hai yakeeN mujhe, tere gham ka mujhe malaal hai
Mujhe apne aap se tu kar aashna, na es qadar mujhko sataa

Teri yaad bhi azeeb hai, tu door hai tou ye qareeb hai
Tujhe bhool ne ki raah mein, teri yaadoN ka kaarwaan mila

Ye kaisi manzil-e-ishq hai, wo chup khaDe takte rahe
Kooche mein oonke roobru, jab mere dil ka qafilaa loota.

Na aandhiyaaN chali yahaaN, mera ghar phir bhi ujaD gaya
Main aaz tak anjaan hoon, mili kis zurm ki mujhko saza

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Re: Meri dilrubaa meri baat maan, koi dard nahiN hai la dava

very nice work:k:...it's always nice to see you in action:)...keep it up:k:
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Re: Meri dilrubaa meri baat maan, koi dard nahiN hai la dava

[QUOTE] *Originally posted by Pramod: * pichhle dino kuchh busy tha. ab jaake kuchh waqt mila hai. soncha apnii ye naii koshish aap logon se share karein...always looking for your valuable comment

Mere dil se tere dard tak , jo ye eik khaloos ki lakeer hai
Oose waqt ki raza pe chhod de, na apne haath se khud mita

Teri yaad bhi ageeb hai, tu door hai tou ye qareeb hai
Tujhe bhool ne ki raah mein, teri yaadoN ka kaarwaan mila

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very nice :k:
thanko for sharing :slight_smile:

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zabar10:k:

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very Nice Pramod jii ,Thanks for sharing:)

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Buhat khoob :k:

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Re: Meri dilrubaa meri baat maan, koi dard nahiN hai la dava

Bohat khoob Pra g thanks 4 sharin…:k:

barey dino baad nazar aiey ap sab khyariat thei na..:slight_smile:

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Re: Re: Meri dilrubaa meri baat maan, koi dard nahiN hai la dava

thanks Amal for your words of encouragment. It will really help me a lot.

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honsla afzaai ke liye aap sabon ka bahot bahot shukriya
Chaand jji, &Passionate, Gul jii and SunnyBoy.

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Re: Re: Meri dilrubaa meri baat maan, koi dard nahiN hai la dava

honsla afzaai ke liye bahot bahot shukriya bahna. aap sabon ka pyaar ke kuchh likh leta hoon, warna aisii koi baat nahin.
pichhle dino office mein bahot busy tha. so could to come to the forum frequently. Anyway! sun kar achha lagta hai ke aap log yaad rakhte ho.
thanks once again.

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paramod ji :k:zaberdast
:slight_smile:
thxs 4 sharing :slight_smile:

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Re: Meri dilrubaa meri baat maan, koi dard nahiN hai la dava

buhat khoob :k:

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Thanks a lot Nikii and Rameesha

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wow pramood jee maza aya perh ker :)

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:k:

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bohttt acheiii :k:

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Good one bahut hi khoob koshish pramod ji keep it up !

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i think u wrote somthin really good:k: … nice work:k:

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ghazal pasand karne aur honsla afzaai ke liye aap sabhee ka bahot bahot shukriya.