~.~ Meri dhaRkan~.~

[ASA]

mera ye haath,
apny haath maiN lekar
zara aankhoN ko band kar lo….
aur phir dheray se apna sir,
mere seene pe tum rakh do,
meri aankhaiN, meri saansaiN,
bouhat khamosh haiN laiken,
mujay tum se jo kehna hai,
meri dharkan zubaaN ban kar,
tumhary kaan maiN keh day.

[Azad]

agar yeh pehli ghalti hay to achi hay

[koiDost]

Very Nice :k:

[ASA]

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@Azad

agar yeh pehli ghalti hay to achi hay

maiN ne aap ko reply kioN nahi kia???

[fara]

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REALLY IMPRESSIVE...

The first sound you hear is your mothers's heartbeat and the rest of your life you feel loved when you hear that steady rhythm. Lovers often listen to each others heartbeat.... Another fact I would like to share is that much of Shakespears's romantic poetry is written in Iambic Pentameter which literary critics have pointed out, echoes the same wonderful da-dum beat.....

[Azad]

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@AsSweetAs

maiN ne aap ko reply kioN nahi kia???

aap zara masroof the sunne sunnay main .. hota hay

[ASA]

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Thanks Fara…

sorry sir G… bus kabhi kabhi karna paRta hai…

[Golden_Scorpion_1]

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Its Very nice… Beautiful… How come I missed it…

Although I know I have read it.. but not in this Thread

[Precious_Khan]

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dair kha … halaka da cha da para di da likalli di.. da kho raat oowaya kana

[Azad]

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@AsSweetAs

Thanks Fara…

sorry sir G… bus kabhi kabhi karna paRta hai…

haan bhai yeh to hay Roza rakhna or Roze se rehna 2 mukh’talif cheezain hain.

[ASA]

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Thanks Goldy…

PK rora… che sta khowakh sho nu sta da para de… ka waye kho che nor hum darta dedicate kem… ?? kho khalko la ba ta jawab warkawe bya..

lol Azad bhai… :k:

[ASA]

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@Azad

haan bhai yeh to hay Roza rakhna or Roze se rehna 2 mukh’talif cheezain hain.

well said… laiken wazahat ke zaroorat hai… kioN k aap aksar kuch aur kehna chahty haiN aur hum kuch aur samjh laity haiN…

[Precious_Khan]

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@AsSweetAs

Thanks Goldy…

PK rora… che sta khowakh sho nu sta da para de… ka waye kho che nor hum darta dedicate kem… ?? kho khalko la ba ta jawab warkawe bya..

lol Azad bhai… :k:

[Azad]

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@AsSweetAs

well said… laiken wazahat ke zaroorat hai… kioN k aap aksar kuch aur kehna chahty haiN aur hum kuch aur samjh laity haiN…

hummm aksar kuch or samjh laite hain … btw aap larki to nahi ho?

[ASA]

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@Azad

hummm aksar kuch or samjh laite hain … btw aap larki to nahi ho?

woh tu mujhay pata hai.. .k aap kya kya samjh laity haiN… :samck: kam az kam aap tu ye sawal na pochayN…

[IS]

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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
*aap to chupay rustam niklay ASA bahi *
*MASHALLAH bohat khoob *

[ASA]

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@Innocent_Smile

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
**aap to chupay rustam niklay ASA bahi **
**MASHALLAH bohat khoob **

jigar! its 2nd time u r saying this… aap ko mujh maiN “rustam” wali konsi baat nazar aaye hai..

[IS]

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@AsSweetAs

jigar! its 2nd time u r saying this… aap ko mujh maiN “rustam” wali konsi baat nazar aaye hai..

mia nay pehlay kab kaha tha
kia pata “rustam” b khaan hoo

[Pakeeza]

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@AsSweetAs

mera ye haath,
apny haath maiN lekar
zara aankhoN ko band kar lo….
aur phir dheray se apna sir,
mere seene pe tum rakh do,
meri aankhaiN, meri saansaiN,
bouhat khamosh haiN laiken,
mujay tum se jo kehna hai,
meri dharkan zubaaN ban kar,
tumhary kaan maiN keh day.

Hmm Phir dharkan nay kiyaa kaha:-d
Very Nice poem AsSweetAs, thanks for sharing, sirf nazmain hi likhtey ho ya ghazal waghera bhi:~)

[ASA]

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@Innocent_Smile

mia nay pehlay kab kaha tha
kia pata “rustam” b khaan hoo

bhool gaye jab Peshawar se ho k gaye they.. wajah tu aap ne nahi batae laiken “rustam” kaha thaa..