Dania very good and thanks for sharing but the poetry seems to be written in different way than it is.
It would be off balance if you say “… Pa Kar Roye”
It will be better if you say “… Pa Ke Roye”
I think the correct version is like this what I remember. It has every ‘shayr’ in rhythm and weight.
Please correct me if I am wrong.
Meri dastan-e-hasrat woh suna suna kay roay
Meray aazmanay walay mujay aazma **kay **roay
Meri arzo ki duniya dil-e-na tawan ki hasrat
**Jisay pa kay shaadma thay ussay kho kay aaj roay
**
Koi aisa ehal-e-dil ho Ke fasanaye mohabbat
Main ussay suna kay royon woh mujay suna kay roay
Teri bewafaiyon par teri kuj addaiyon par
Kabhi Sar jhuka kay roay kabi moo chupa kay roay
Jo sunayee anjuman nay shab-e-gham ki aap beeti
Kai ro kay muskaraye ,kai muskara kay roay
Mera pass say guzar kar mera hal tak na poocha
Main Yeh kaisay maan jaon Ke woh door ja kay roay
I think it is Saifuddin Saif Kalaam.
It has been sung by Ustaad Amanat Ali and then by Munni Begum and perhaps by Aziz Mian Qawwal.
The Best was by Amanat Ali Khan in my opinion.
