Meri dastan hasrat wo suna suna kar roye

**Meri dastan-e-hasrat woh suna suna kay roay
Meray aazmanay walay mujay aazma kay roay

Meri arzo ki duniya dil-e-na tawan ki hasrat
Jisay pa kay shaadma thay ussay kho kay aaj roay

Koi aisa ehal-e-dil ho Ke fasanaye mohabbat
Main ussay suna kay royon woh mujay suna kay roay

Teri bewafaiyon par teri kuj addaiyon par
Kabhi Sar jhuka kay roay kabi moo chupa kay roay

Jo sunayee anjuman nay shab-e-gham ki aap beeti
Kai ro kay muskaraye ,kai muskara kay roay

Mera pass say guzar kar mera hal tak na poocha
Main Yeh kaisay maan jaon Ke woh door ja kay roay**

Bohat Umdah Dania..:lajawab:

Re: Meri dastan hasrat wo suna suna kar roye

boht achi:)

Re: Meri dastan hasrat wo suna suna kar roye

Very Nice Dania

Re: Meri dastan hasrat wo suna suna kar roye

thanx :)
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Re: Meri dastan hasrat wo suna suna kar roye

Dania very good and thanks for sharing but the poetry seems to be written in different way than it is.

It would be off balance if you say ".... Pa Kar Roye"

It will be better if you say "... Pa Ke Roye"

I think the correct version is like this what I remember. It has every 'shayr' in rhythm and weight.

Please correct me if I am wrong.

Meri dastan-e-hasrat woh suna suna kay roay
Meray aazmanay walay mujay aazma **kay **roay

Meri arzo ki duniya dil-e-na tawan ki hasrat
Jisay pa kay shaadma thay ussay kho kay aaj roay
**
Koi aisa ehal-e-dil ho Ke fasanaye mohabbat
Main ussay suna kay royon woh mujay suna **kay
roay

Teri bewafaiyon par teri kuj addaiyon par
Kabhi Sar jhuka kay roay kabi moo chupa kay roay

Jo sunayee anjuman nay shab-e-gham ki aap beeti
Kai ro kay muskaraye ,kai muskara kay roay

Mera pass say guzar kar mera hal tak na poocha
Main Yeh kaisay maan jaon Ke woh door ja kay roay

I think it is Saifuddin Saif Kalaam.

It has been sung by Ustaad Amanat Ali and then by Munni Begum and perhaps by Aziz Mian Qawwal.

The Best was by Amanat Ali Khan in my opinion.

Re: Meri dastan hasrat wo suna suna kar roye

Nice sharing

done :k: thanks :slight_smile:

kal halki halki barish tikal sard hwa ka raks b takal pool b nikrey nikhrey te kal unme apka ruks b takal badal kaley gehre te kal chand pe lakhon pehrey tekkuch tukre apki yadon k bari dair de dil me thehrey tekuch yadeain ulji ulji tijo kal tk kuch na sulji ti.........kal yad bohat tm aye te............. kal yad bhd tm aye te..............

Re: Meri dastan hasrat wo suna suna kar roye

great great ghazal.....its my fav...thanx for sharing dania...

Re: Meri dastan hasrat wo suna suna kar roye

:)

**bohot khoob… :k: **

Re: Meri dastan hasrat wo suna suna kar roye

nice sharing sir

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Im not sir :snooty:

kabhi aansuon ko sukha gaye meray soz-e-dil ke hararatein
kabhi dil ke naao dibo gayen meray aansuon ki rawaniyaan

Re: Meri dastan hasrat wo suna suna kar roye

Bohat khoob

Re: Meri dastan hasrat wo suna suna kar roye

zabardast.....................!!Meri dastaan e hasraat sunna key roya...........:) wah thanx for sharing :)

Re: Meri dastan hasrat wo suna suna kar roye

**Koi aisa Ehl e Dil ho k fasana e muhabbat!!!!!!!!
Main usay suna k ro'oon Woh mjhy suna k roey

Awesome Dania......
thanks for sharing it here!!!!

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