teri guftaguu meiN hai jo chashni jo tere laboN meiN halavteiN
na suruur vo fasl-e-bahaar meiN na guloN meiN haiN wo latafateiN
kahaN rah gayeN teri nigahateN vo sabaa kidhar ko nikal gaye
teri aahaToN ko taras gayeeN mere jism-o-jaaN ki sama’ateN
meRi chashm-e-gam dil-e-muzatrib gam-e-aarazu gam-e-justju
liye phir rahaa huuN nagaR nagaR kisi meherbaN ki amaanateiN
Re: meRi chashm-e-gam dil-e-muzatrib gam-e-aarazu gam-e-justaju
beautiful NikamiJi:k:…KahaaN reh gaeiN teri nigahateiN…
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hmmm kahin nahi Aymal ap k aa’s pass…tu jahaN jahaN chalay gha meRa saya sath ho gha…
I know you are around...
meRi chashm-e-gam dil-e-muzatrib gam-e-aarazu gam-e-justju
liye phir rahaa huuN nagaR nagaR kisi meherbaN ki amaanateiN
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bhut khoob nikami ji :k:
Re: meRi chashm-e-gam dil-e-muzatrib gam-e-aarazu gam-e-justaju
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*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *
teri guftaguu meiN hai jo chashni jo tere laboN meiN halavteiN
na suruur vo fasl-e-bahaar meiN na guloN meiN latafateiN
kahaN rah gayeN teri nigahateN vo sabaa kidhar ko nikal gaye
teri aahaToN ko taras gayeeN mere jism-o-jaaN ki sama'ateN
meRi chashm-e-gam dil-e-muzatrib gam-e-aarazu gam-e-justju
liye phir rahaa huuN nagaR nagaR kisi meherbaN ki amaanateiN
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khoobsorat intekhaab NJ :)
thanks niki and Rameesha g.............:)
Re: meRi chashm-e-gam dil-e-muzatrib gam-e-aarazu gam-e-justaju
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*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *
teri guftaguu meiN hai jo chashni jo tere laboN meiN halavteiN
na suruur vo fasl-e-bahaar meiN na guloN meiN latafateiN
kahaN rah gayeN teri nigahateN vo sabaa kidhar ko nikal gaye
teri aahaToN ko taras gayeeN mere jism-o-jaaN ki sama'ateN
meRi chashm-e-gam dil-e-muzatrib gam-e-aarazu gam-e-justju
liye phir rahaa huuN nagaR nagaR kisi meherbaN ki amaanateiN
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U always come with something great, Behna.
Thanks for sharing.
Re: meRi chashm-e-gam dil-e-muzatrib gam-e-aarazu gam-e-justaju
naah!!! nikami tum abhi tak nahi sudhri 
kaam chor kaheen ki!! thori si mehnat kar ke pori nazm hi likh deti .. Hasan Rizvi ka sab se behtareen misra censor kiyon kar diya ???
ne ways good one like always :k:
hamisah ke tarha… nice one… :k:
Hmmmmm
Acha hai;)
Buhat Umdah NJ sis, Thanku for sharing :)
Re: Hmmmmm
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*Originally posted by Muddi: *
Acha hai;)
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kon?............;)
This was good
This was good. Bus zara pehla she'r kuchh sahih nahiN lag riya hai...
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teri guftaguu meiN hai jo chashni jo tere laboN meiN halavteiN
na suruur vo fasl-e-bahaar meiN na guloN meiN latafateiN
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My guess is that the second misra' should be:
na suroor woh fasl-e-bahaar meiN, na guloN meiN haiN woh lataafateiN
Re: This was good
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*Originally posted by Resurrected: *
This was good. Bus zara pehla she'r kuchh sahih nahiN lag riya hai...
My guess is that the second misra' should be:
na suroor woh fasl-e-bahaar meiN, na guloN meiN haiN woh lataafateiN
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ur guess is right i thought same thought but but soocha me tu shaira ha nahi yahan barey barey shaier hian ietraaz karen gain.but ap ka thanks jo ap ne correct kia me correct karti over too...........:)
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*Originally posted by Pramod: *
U always come with something great, Behna.
Thanks for sharing.
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thanks Pra g ......ap ka zoaq hai warna bandi kis qabil.....:)
thanks AssweetAs and Gul-e-Tea sis...........:)
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hmmm keon keon jo hamarey mutlab k they hum ne post kar dya ap ak anghan hamarey mutlab ka nahi tha nahi kia…
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*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *
Yqinunn Woh Jiss Kay Liay Likha na.......:)
Orr Millna Hai Too Aa jaoo Waheen...........MSN pur kithay
kon?............;)
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bohat khoob nikkami janoo..:)
:)
hope you stil remember me...
good as usual...