Meri banhoon mein simat gye ho...

chodhry · August 14, 2003, 5:05pm

Kia kabhi mein bhi aisey yaad aya hoon?
key hansi laboon pay aatey aatey
nammi ban key aankhoon mein theher gye ho
mehfil sey dil uchaat ho gya ho
aur tanhaye ki pnaah mein
tasavur ki dunya mein jhaank ker
beetey lamhoon ki waddi mein beithi
khawab devi sey
kuch neend mustaar ley ker
meri banhoon mein simat gye ho

-chodhry

TajMahal · August 14, 2003, 5:08pm

bahut khoob chodhry! thanks for sharing !!

chodhry · August 14, 2003, 9:26pm

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*Originally posted by TajMahal: *
bahut khoob chodhry! thanks for sharing !!
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thankyou TajMahal

SuraJ · August 15, 2003, 5:39am

Chodry sahib kamaal ki likhi hai ap ney:)

chodhry · August 15, 2003, 7:14pm

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*Originally posted by SuraJ: *
Chodry sahib kamaal ki likhi hai ap ney:)
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buhat shukria suraj bhai...

amirbilal · August 16, 2003, 6:00am

zabardast
bohat khoob ji bohat khoob

YAaRrOo · August 16, 2003, 8:46am

Chodry Very Nice :k:

This is ur own writing ???

cuteepie · August 16, 2003, 8:48am

:k:

chodhry · August 16, 2003, 1:56pm

thank you ** Yaarroo*, **cuteepie* and amir

jee Yaarroo apni hey meri.

Muslim_Queen · August 16, 2003, 2:15pm

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Kia kabhi mein bhi aisey yaad aya hoon?
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nice...

DiYa · August 16, 2003, 8:12pm

nice

chodhry · August 17, 2003, 3:21pm

thankyou Diya and MQ

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 17, 2003, 4:15pm

wow :k:

its beautiful :k::k::k:

keep it up

Azad · August 18, 2003, 7:10am

chodhry · August 19, 2003, 5:39pm

Thank you HH and Azad

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 19, 2003, 5:43pm

niceeeeeeeee:k:

chodhry · August 19, 2003, 5:57pm

meri saarre shyeri ko do expressions mein qaid ker dya hey aaap ney.

btw kia waqye aisa hov aaap key saath???

hehhhe

system · August 19, 2003, 7:05pm

ahaan, bohat khoob, :k::k:

ullujii · August 19, 2003, 7:15pm

nice :k:

chodhry · August 21, 2003, 9:58am

thank You *GKK, Vivo and Ullu Jee *