meri band palkooN pay TooT ker koi phool raat bikher gya

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal February 25, 2008, 5:11am 1

meri zindgi bhi meri nahiN ye hazaar Kha’nooN meiN baT ga’ee
mujhay aik mutthe zameen day ye zameeN kitn1 simaT ga’ee

teri yaad aa’ee tu chup rahooN zara chup rahooN tu ghazal k’hooN
ye ajeeb aag ki bail thi meray tan’badaN say lipaT ga’ee

mujhay likhnay wala likhay b kia mujhay paRhnay wala paRhay b kia
jahaaN tera naam likha gay’a wahiN rooshna’ee ulaT ga’ee

na koi KHushee na malaal hai k sabhi ka aik sa haal hay
teray sukh k din bhi guzar ga’ey meri Gham ki raat bhi kaT ga’ee

meri band palkooN pay TooT ker koi phool raat bikher gya
*mujhay siskiuN nay jaga de’a meri kachee neeNd ucha’eT ga’ee *

muddii February 25, 2008, 5:15am 2

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Zabardast Choice:) as usual

Shab-e-Hijar February 25, 2008, 6:16am 3

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bohat khoob :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke February 25, 2008, 6:27am 4

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superb.

muncho February 25, 2008, 10:17am 5

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Waah g kia kahnay bahut khoob waali soorat poetry

Ali_2 February 25, 2008, 11:24am 6

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Superb sharing as always Koyal

being_lonely February 25, 2008, 11:50am 7

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bohal aala koyal jee maza aya parh kar :k:

Likes for sale.

Zakhmi_Umar February 25, 2008, 12:07pm 8

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buhat khoob :k:

thanks for sharing

Aryaan February 25, 2008, 12:09pm 9

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Excellent Koyal..:k:

bheegiyaad February 25, 2008, 12:52pm 10

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awesome ku ku :k:

m.a.d.i.h.a February 25, 2008, 6:54pm 11

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it's beautiful

WiseGuy February 25, 2008, 6:57pm 12

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bohat khoob. :)

babri February 25, 2008, 8:11pm 13

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nice one. :k:

Jhanjharewali February 27, 2008, 9:04am 14

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*lovely lovely lovely. *

Koyal February 27, 2008, 6:39pm 15

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^ thanks THanks THanks :)

being_lonely February 27, 2008, 6:42pm 16

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birdy jee hru ? kahan gum rehti hain aaj kal ?

Koyal February 27, 2008, 11:40pm 17

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^ lonley me yahaN hoti ap kahaN rahtey ap hotey huwey b nahi hotey :(

Koyal February 27, 2008, 11:57pm 18

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thanks gazal :)

being_lonely February 28, 2008, 3:06am 19

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sahi pehchana :)