Meri aur Aapki Shayeri

rarkan · July 19, 2008, 10:01pm

I have started this thread to share your and mine poetry,

I am starting with my two Ash’aar:

These are basically on Pakistani Politics:

Phaily (spreaded) hai har soo mulk mein berozgari aur mehngai
    Assemblian hain theatre Hakoomat hai Fankar aur Awaam Tamashai

Peetay palatay hain woh sabhi aik hee jaam mein
yeh awaami numainde jo nangay hain aik hee hamam mein

rarkan · July 29, 2008, 1:31pm

Any comments????

muncho · July 29, 2008, 3:34pm

Re: Meri aur Aapki Shayeri

agar ye aap ki zaati kawish hey tu 'shora e gupshup' mai post honi chahiyaa. yahan "intekhab'' mai sub apney pasundeeda shora ka muntakhib kalam paish kartay. :)

rarkan · August 6, 2008, 11:21am

Wahan chalay chalte hain. :):)

muncho · August 6, 2008, 3:41pm

Re: Meri aur Aapki Shayeri

g zaroor kiyun nahi!

Shab-e-Hijar · August 7, 2008, 3:53am

welcome here :)

muncho · August 16, 2008, 9:28pm

shukrun g; laikin rarkan kahan gaib ho gaey?