Meri arzoo...

Tassneef · June 24, 2002, 2:56pm

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Originally posted by Nayab:
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Originally posted by Tassneef:
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Kion banate ho reet pe ye mehel jisse
aik din khud girah do ghay tum..
Aj kehte ho is jali se pyaar hai
Kal mera naam tak mitha do ghay tum....**
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mujrim hooN teraa aa mujhe jo chaahe sazaa de
is dil meiN mohabbat ki sanam aag lagaa de
duniyaa se kabhi pyaar kaa shikwaa na karooNgaa
le haath meiN KHanjar meri gardan ko urhaa de

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KucH Raat Dhaley Dil meiN parcHaaiyaaN roti haiN,
Saaye meiN DarakHtoN ke TanhaaiyaaaN roti haiN

Nayab · June 24, 2002, 4:36pm

Kohi esha qalaam deh dewaane keh hath main Y-RAAB
Keh asmaan par likh keh jaho..HAAN UNHI SE PYAAR HAI

Tassneef · June 24, 2002, 5:14pm

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Originally posted by Nayab:
Kohi esha qalaam deh dewaane keh hath main Y-RAAB
Keh asmaan par likh keh jaho..HAAN UNHI SE PYAAR HAI
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Ya Rabb wo samjhe haiN na samjheiNgey meri baat
De aur Dil unko, jo na de mujhko ZubaaN aur**

KucH Raat Dhaley Dil meiN parcHaaiyaaN roti haiN,
Saaye meiN DarakHtoN ke TanhaaiyaaaN roti haiN

Nayab · June 24, 2002, 5:33pm

Kia samjhay ghay saheel ki tama shay
Hum ne dhoob ke dekhi hai mohabbat ki gehrahi

Tassneef · June 24, 2002, 5:44pm

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Originally posted by Nayab:
Kia samjhay ghay saheel ki tama shay
Hum ne dhoob ke dekhi hai mohabbat ki gehrahi
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Mujh se keya Doobne waaloN ka patta poocHte ho
MaiN Samundar ka Hawaala na kinare ki Misaal**

KucH Raat Dhaley Dil meiN parcHaaiyaaN roti haiN,
Saaye meiN DarakHtoN ke TanhaaiyaaaN roti haiN

Nayab · June 24, 2002, 6:06pm

kinare peh kardhe ho kar
kinara dekhne walhee
yeh andazah hai tujh ko
doob jahna kis ko kehte hai ....

Tassneef · June 25, 2002, 9:23am

**Sai’i ka Anjaam pehle hi se aataa thaa nazar
Haath Sahil hi pe Berhey se uThaa beThey they ham **

Note:-- Sai’i = Koshish , Berhaa= Behri Qaflaa (JazahaZ,Kashti)
i know keh aap matlab jaanti hoNgi magar wo Roman Urdu meiN sahi Lafz ke likhne meiN zara dushwaari thi iss lyie bataa diya

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Waaizo Aatish-e-DauzakH se JahaN ko tumne
Yeh Draiyaa hai keh kHud ban gaye Darr ki Soorat

Nayab · June 25, 2002, 3:09pm

Thanks jee keh aap neh bata diya…is seh aur bhi ashani ho jahtee hai samajhne hai …kion keh jab tak samajh na ahay shairi ki tab tak shair-o-shairi ka mazha hi nahin …right

Nayab · June 25, 2002, 3:11pm

Chup chap na leh jahe sumundaar ko utha kar
Woh shaaks jo sahil peh kardha soch raha hai.

Tassneef · June 25, 2002, 4:10pm

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Originally posted by Nayab:
Chup chap na leh jahe sumundaar ko utha kar
Woh shaaks jo sahil peh kardha soch raha hai.
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kucH Yaadein usski beech Samundar Doob gaiN
kucH Sapney reh us paar gaye,ham haar gaye

Waaizo Aatish-e-DauzakH se JahaN ko tumne
Yeh Draiyaa hai keh kHud ban gaye Darr ki Soorat

Nayab · June 26, 2002, 3:11am

Meri khamoosh nigahooN ko galat mat samjho
Koun kehta hai ke is dil main tera piyaar nahin

[This message has been edited by Nayab (edited June 26, 2002).]

Tassneef · June 26, 2002, 8:19am

Uff keya collection aur choice hai aap ki..insaan ko sochne pe majboor kar deti

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keep it up i am enjoing

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ye kai’h sakte ho ham dil meiN nahiN haiN par ye bataao
ki jab dil meiN tumhiN tum ho to aaNkhoN se nihaaN kyoN ho **

Waaizo Aatish-e-DauzakH se JahaN ko tumne
Yeh Draiyaa hai keh kHud ban gaye Darr ki Soorat

Nayab · June 26, 2002, 1:20pm

thanks jee ..

lekin nihaan ka matlub kia howa jee

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XChorniX · June 26, 2002, 1:23pm

sigh aap log abhi tukk baaz nahi aaye?

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kya hoga aap donon ka!!

wese very nice

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both of u, keep it up

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OnE LoVe

Tassneef · June 26, 2002, 1:24pm

NihaaN = Hidden, Posheedaa

aaankh se nihaaN hone ka matlab hai NazroN se door hona

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Waaizo Aatish-e-DauzakH se JahaN ko tumne
Yeh Draiyaa hai keh kHud ban gaye Darr ki Soorat

Tassneef · June 26, 2002, 1:26pm

hhee haam kioUN baaz aaiNgee..koi Jurm hai yeh lollzz

Jo kar rahe haiN sar-e-aam kar rahe haiN,
lekiN keya akr rahe haiN

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Waaizo Aatish-e-DauzakH se JahaN ko tumne
Yeh Draiyaa hai keh kHud ban gaye Darr ki Soorat

XChorniX · June 26, 2002, 1:29pm

array aap donon nahi baaz aayenge tou aur kon aayega? itne din ho gaye yeh competition ho raha hai bus bhi karain aap donon ko dekh ke mein thukk gaiee hoon lekin aap nahi thakay

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OnE LoVe

Tassneef · June 26, 2002, 1:34pm

hhaaha dekhnaaa hamne aapko bhagaa dena hai lolzz aap ChorioN se baaz aa hi jaaiNgi aik din lollzz

Waaizo Aatish-e-DauzakH se JahaN ko tumne
Yeh Draiyaa hai keh kHud ban gaye Darr ki Soorat

Nayab · June 26, 2002, 1:55pm

Thanks tassneef jee keh aap neh bataya...ab samjhee main..

He he chorni jee aap kion takh ghay hai ...hum aik dosreh se muqablah nahin kar rehe...ab to eshi hi.. u know

Aur wese bhi tasseef jee seh muqablah to hum kar hi nahin sakhtay...kion keh un ka haar aik shair humhara shair`s seh acha hota hai...

Tassneef · June 26, 2002, 1:58pm

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Originally posted by Nayab:
**Thanks tassneef jee keh aap neh bataya...ab samjhee main..

He he chorni jee aap kion takh ghay hai ...hum aik dosreh se muqablah nahin kar rehe...ab to eshi hi.. u know

Aur wese bhi tasseef jee seh muqablah to hum kar hi nahin sakhtay...kion keh un ka haar aik shair humhara shair`s seh acha hota hai...**
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Mere ashaar ka muqaablaa aap ki Choice se anyaab
meraa abhi tak passeeenaa nahiN sookhaaaa lollzzzzz aap ke ashaar behad nayaab haiN ...aur mere liye aksar naye haiN !!!

Waaizo Aatish-e-DauzakH se JahaN ko tumne
Yeh Draiyaa hai keh kHud ban gaye Darr ki Soorat