meRi aa's hai kisi auR se mujhaY pochta koi auR hai

NikamiJano · July 5, 2006, 2:17am

**** *tujhaY kai khabaR meRay be-khabaR meRa silsla koi auR hai* *jo mujhi ko muj se baham kaRay wo garaiz-e-pa koi auR hai*

meray moasmooN k bhi toaR they meRay barg-o-baar he auR they
magaR ab ravish hai alag koi magaR ab hawa koi aur hai

yehi shehaR shehaR-e-qaRar hai tu dil-e-shikasta ki kheR ho
meRi aa’s hai kisi auR se mujhaY pochta koi auR hai

haiN muhabatooN ki aamantaiN yehi hijRataiN yehi quRbataiN
dee’ay baam-o-daR kis auR ne tu raha basaa koi auR hai

ye fiza k rang khulay khulaY isi paish-o-pus k haiN silsalay
abhi khush nawa koi auR tha abhi puR kusha koi auR hai

dil-e-zood-o-ranj na kaR gila kisi gaRam -o-saRd raqeeb ka
rukh-e-na saza tuu hai roo baRoo paas-e-na saza koi auR hai**

Shab-e-Hijar · July 5, 2006, 4:50am

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woww bohat khoob jano gi
love reading it

farooqahmad · July 5, 2006, 6:49am

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{{dil-e-zood-o-ranj na kaR gila kisi gaRam -o-saRd raqeeb ka
rukh-e-na saza tuu hai roo baRoo paas-e-na saza koi auR hai}}

Very very nice. Thanks for wonderful stuff **NJ.

saroo · July 5, 2006, 7:08am

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Teri roshni teray khado khal say mukhtalif to nahi magar
Tu kareeeb aa tujhay deekh loon tu wahi hay ya koi aur hay

I thought this was part of this gazal........and is it by Ibn-e-Insha......Its wonderfull anyway

mahamkhan · July 5, 2006, 9:07am

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very nice stuff.....thnx!

Prince_Ali · July 5, 2006, 10:17am

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Very nice :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 5, 2006, 10:59am

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wah wah kya baat hay aapki:-)

NikamiJano · July 5, 2006, 8:32pm

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nahi saroo ye naseer tarabi ki hia ibn-e-insha ki b is se milti julti hia :)

NikamiJano · July 5, 2006, 8:34pm

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suchi:blush:

NikamiJano · July 5, 2006, 8:52pm

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thanks

NikamiJano · July 8, 2006, 3:23am

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thanks maham :)

reet · July 9, 2006, 10:48am

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haiN muhabatooN ki aamantaiN yehi hijRataiN yehi quRbataiN
dee'ay baam-o-daR kis auR ne tu raha basaa koi auR hai

bahot hi khoobsurat hai.......thnx for this nice sharing.......!

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 9, 2006, 6:18pm

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suchi…Muchi :-p

Amal · July 9, 2006, 7:26pm

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NikamiJi chaa gai heiN aap Bohat hi shaandaar ghazal hey. A typical-NikamiJi selection

WiseGuy · July 10, 2006, 12:20pm

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Nice...
Thank you for sharinf

NikamiJano · July 13, 2006, 1:37am

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Really…kher itni b nikami slection nahi hia Aymal

NikamiJano · July 13, 2006, 1:38am

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ur welcome ap aj kla hotey kahan hian....kin hawaoN main :)

sad_affect · July 13, 2006, 4:06pm

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*meray moasmooN k bhi toaR they meRay barg-o-baar he auR they
magaR ab ravish hai alag koi magaR ab hawa koi aur hai
*
A zabardast stuff, kia baat hai, the end ker diya

ullujii · July 15, 2006, 12:41am

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beautyfull poem. :)

cyborg909 · September 19, 2008, 5:40am

the ghazal posted is by naseer tarabi,

isi zameen par saleem kausar ki ghazal ka shair hai jo app nay likha hai

salim kausar ki ghazal sang beautifully by jagjit

main khayal hoon kisi aur ka mujhey soochta koi aur hai
sar-e-aaina mera aks hai pas-e-aina koi aur hai