aaj tum miley b ho to kis mor pe
jahan main zindagi ka safar
adha teh kar chuki hun
jahan tak pohanchney mein hi
payon chalon sey bhar gaye hain
*** or rooh zakhmon sey ***
palat k wapis ayoon bhi to kis tara
k in zakhmon sey rista lahu
mujhey wapis janey ki ijazat nhi deta
tumharey aney sey
dekhna seekh rahi hain meri ankhen
kuch khuab khushnuma sey
lekin main janti hun k
tabeer in ki bhayanak ho gi
qk zindagi
***apni tamam tar sachai k sath ***
merey samney khari hai
to jane jana
mujhey or kuch nhi kehna
siwaye is k
k tumharey aney sey jo phool sey khil rahey hain
wo na hi khiltey to acha tha
tu jo miley b ho to
na h miltey to acha tha
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Wow...That IS something. It's so mature and calculated. Pehley kahaN thieN aap Rani saheba? :) Thanx for sharing your writings with us :)
Re: Merey maseeha
Rani Ji....Great !
Aapne Na Sirf Apna Balke Jhansi Ka bhi Bharam Rakh Liya.
Darwesh.
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amal and darwesh
aap 2no ka be had shukriya aap k ilfaaz merey liye bohat qeemti hain aik bar phir shukriya mera hosla barhaney k liye
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bohut khoob janab
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thx charming
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excellent poem....thx 4 sharing
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Rani G kamal hay … **i don’t know why i feel that i know you B4 
**… buhat kamal kay jazbaat ka izhar hota hay aap key nazmoon main aur bari baat yah hay kal taweel nazmoon main bhi aap readhers ka irtakaz totnay naheen daiti hain … zabardust …
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sanan g aap ka be had shukriya , aap ney jis khoobsurat andaz mein mera hosla barhaya hai aap ki be had mashkoor hun umeed hai aap ainda bhi apni qeemti Ara sey nawaztey rahen gey