merey khema-e-dil k paas kahiN ek jugnoo the'her gaya aur phir

Koyal · July 21, 2008, 4:22am

is dil k chan’d asaason meiN ek mausam hai barsatoN ka
ek sehra hijr ki raatoN ka, ek jungle visaal key khwaboN ka

is choudhveeN raat k saa’ey meiN jab aakhri baar miley the hum
ye dil pagal kab bhoolta hai wo baaGh-e-sufaid gulaaboN ka

merey khema-e-dil k paas kahiN ek jugnoo theher gaya aur phir
sailaab tha saari basti meiN andaazoN ka awaazoN ka

hum loog junooN k aalam meiN manzil ki talab bhi bhool gaye
ab dil ko bhala sa lagta hai sehra meiN aqs saraaboN ka

jin lafzoN k kuch maa’ni they wo lafz to khwaab hu’ey lekiN
***ab shehar meiN lagta jaata hai ek mela nayi mitaaboN ka ***

S.786 · July 21, 2008, 6:07am

Re: merey khema-e-dil k paas kahiN ek jugnoo the'her gaya aur phir

waaah best....kis ki hy ghazal..?

muncho · July 21, 2008, 11:13am

Re: merey khema-e-dil k paas kahiN ek jugnoo the'her gaya aur phir

hum loog junooN k aalam meiN manzil ki talab bhi bhool gaye
ab dil ko bhala sa lagta hai sehra meiN aqs saraaboN ka

jin lafzoN k kuch maa'ni they wo lafz to khwaab hu'ey lekiN
ab shehar meiN lagta jaata hai ek mela nayi mitaaboN ka (typo error haiga shayud)

waaah waa bahut aala

Shab-e-Hijar · July 21, 2008, 4:38pm

very nice sharin :)

ullujii · July 21, 2008, 6:23pm

Re: merey khema-e-dil k paas kahiN ek jugnoo the’her gaya aur phir

koyal jii ap ke poetry main dard bohoot hota hai. kun say Tree ka kanta chub gaya hai ap co..humin batin hum vo tree he toor dain gay

ps: nic sharing

Daanie · July 22, 2008, 6:55pm

Re: merey khema-e-dil k paas kahiN ek jugnoo the'her gaya aur phir

buhut khoob :)

Koyal · July 22, 2008, 9:41pm

us tree pe ulu betha na agar tree tor deeya tu wo gir jaaiey gha

itsarshad · July 22, 2008, 10:03pm

Re: merey khema-e-dil k paas kahiN ek jugnoo the'her gaya aur phir

bht khub janab

ullujii · July 23, 2008, 12:35am

to phir U ke poetry se dard kis tara nikala jay me want to kick out this pain from your poetry

Sheal · July 23, 2008, 1:17am

Re: merey khema-e-dil k paas kahiN ek jugnoo the’her gaya aur phir

nice sharing koyal :k:

redidentity · July 23, 2008, 3:58am

Re: merey khema-e-dil k paas kahiN ek jugnoo the’her gaya aur phir

beautiful.. :k:

NikamiJano · July 23, 2008, 12:15pm

Re: merey khema-e-dil k paas kahiN ek jugnoo the'her gaya aur phir

nice sahring koyal :)

Starlight · July 23, 2008, 8:57pm

vah!!

Koyal · July 25, 2008, 3:27am

thanks Sheal

EEMAAN · July 29, 2008, 9:05pm

Re: merey khema-e-dil k paas kahiN ek jugnoo the'her gaya aur phir

Bohat khoob..

Koyal · July 30, 2008, 3:38am

thanks emaan :)

ASA · July 30, 2008, 4:17am

Re: merey khema-e-dil k paas kahiN ek jugnoo the'her gaya aur phir

bouhat umda

muddii · July 30, 2008, 4:20am

Buhat Khub........parh kay maza aa giya Koyal Jii:)

Koyal · July 30, 2008, 10:53am

thanks sweet :)

Jhanjharewali · August 9, 2008, 5:07am

Re: merey khema-e-dil k paas kahiN ek jugnoo the'her gaya aur phir

loved it Kokojaan :)