merey aangan main jab bay'loN k pattay toot jatay haiN

Koyal · September 17, 2007, 3:03am

***tanaa’oo maiN jab aa ja’yeN to dhagay toot jatay haiN
zara si baat per da’reena rishtay toot jatay haiN

tumhaiN is baat per hay’rat k toota hai hamara dil
muqabil jab k hooN pather to sheeshay toot jatay haiN

guzertay waqt se cheezaiN purani ho hi jati haiN
diloN per may’el perhti hai to jazbay toot jatay haiN

hazarooN khwahishen tarteeb pati hain khay’aalon maiN
mager jab aankh khulti hai to jazbay toot jatay haiN

uma’ed atay haiN jhuri’yon main hazaroN dukh zamanay k
guzer ker umr ke hissay se chehray toot jatay haiN

na janay ke’yun tumhari yaad ati hai mujhay us dam
merey aangan main jab bay’loN k pattay toot jatay haiN

dukhon maiN to nikal atay hain ankhoN se zaheer aansu
khushi ke mosmooN maiN bhi kinaray toot jatay haiN***

Shab-e-Hijar · September 17, 2007, 3:40am

Re: merey aangan main jab bay’loN k pattay toot jatay haiN

very nice :k:

Dushwari · September 17, 2007, 3:56am

Re: merey aangan main jab bay'loN k pattay toot jatay haiN

Koyal,
this is a nice poem.
hope it is uplifting for the protagonist.
thanks for sharing.
best,

Dushwari

redidentity · September 17, 2007, 4:25am

Re: merey aangan main jab bay'loN k pattay toot jatay haiN

Thnx :)

Dushwari · September 17, 2007, 4:29am

Re: merey aangan main jab bay'loN k pattay toot jatay haiN

redidentity, who are you?

koyal or red id?

deep_ocean · September 17, 2007, 8:39am

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P.S Buhat khoob Koyal

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 17, 2007, 8:41am

Re: merey aangan main jab bay'loN k pattay toot jatay haiN

Very nice Koyal ji, aaj kal Phool Pattey buhat yaad aa rahey heiN aapko, maajra kya hey :p

SJ · September 17, 2007, 8:47am

Re: merey aangan main jab bay’loN k pattay toot jatay haiN

Awesome sharing Koyal Sis:)
bohat maza aaya parh k app ki ghazal:hugz:

Koyal · September 17, 2007, 10:32am

Re: merey aangan main jab bay'loN k pattay toot jatay haiN

ap ko bajay they na ap ne a k thanks nahi kia ap ko yaad dila rehi :D :p

sunny_nicky · September 17, 2007, 11:22am

Re: merey aangan main jab bay'loN k pattay toot jatay haiN

na janay ke'yun tumhari yaad ati hai mujhay us dam
merey aangan main jab bay'loN k pattay toot jatay haiN

awesem koyal nice sharingg

Koyal · September 18, 2007, 7:45pm

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thanks :)

muddii · September 19, 2007, 3:02am

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Buhat he khubsoorat post…

tum_bin_1 · September 19, 2007, 8:19am

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Bohat he khubsurat Ghazal hai :k:
zaberdast :k:

Koyal · September 19, 2007, 11:24am

Re: merey aangan main jab bay’loN k pattay toot jatay haiN

thanks tum bin

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 19, 2007, 1:44pm

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Kab bhejey they :halo4:

Prince_Ali · September 19, 2007, 4:08pm

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nice sharing Koyal :k:

Koyal · September 19, 2007, 8:54pm

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Masoom se poochna tha :halo4:

Koyal · September 21, 2007, 5:19pm

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thanks

muncho · September 21, 2007, 9:23pm

Re: merey aangan main jab bay'loN k pattay toot jatay haiN

hmmm par sawaal ye hay k aisa hota kiyun hay?
phair wee thanks for posting nice gajal

Koyal · September 22, 2007, 2:39pm

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:)