Mere Sabar Ka Na Lay Imtihaan

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Bholay_Bisray July 11, 2006, 6:22am 1

Mere Sabar Ka Na Lay Imtihaan

Mare Sabar Ka Na Lay Imtihaan,
Mare Khaamoshi Ko Sadaa Na Day,
Jo Tare Baghair Na Jee Sake,
Use Jeene Ki To Duaa Na Day,

To Azeez Dill-o-nazar Se Hai,
To Qareeb Rag-o-jaan Sai Hai
Mare Jism-o-jaan Ka Yeh Faasla,
Kaheen Waqt Aur Barhaa Na Day,

Tujhe Bhool Ke Na Bhulaa Sakoon,
Tujhe Chah Ke Bhi Na Paa Sakoon,
Meri Hasratoon Ko Shumaar Kar,
Meri Chahatoon Ka Silaa Na Day,

Wo Tarap Jo Shula-e-jaan Main Thi,
Mere Tan Badan Se Lipat Gayi,
Jo Bujha Sake To Bujha esey,
Na Bujhaa Sake To Hawaa Na De,

Tujhe Agar Milein Kabhi Fursatein,
Mere Shaam Phir Se Sanwaar Day,
Agar Qatal Karna Hai To Qatal Kar ,
Yoon Judaaiyoon Ki Sazaa Na Day,

Amal July 11, 2006, 1:31pm 2

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Kya baat hey janaab :k: … zabardast nazm hey..thanx for sharing

Muzna July 11, 2006, 2:06pm 3

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Nice piece of work.....
inspiring.

sad_affect July 11, 2006, 2:24pm 4

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zabardast

Prince_Ali July 11, 2006, 3:15pm 5

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Very nice :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh July 11, 2006, 3:25pm 6

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Beautiful poem BB,:k:
iss baar neela rung nazar nahi ayaa haerat hay:-p

Koyal July 11, 2006, 6:48pm 7

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neela aasmaa’N so gaya hai

Koyal July 11, 2006, 6:50pm 8

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beautiful and welcome back Bb :)

Bholay_Bisray July 11, 2006, 9:39pm 9

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Amal aap say ayk zaroori kaam hay, rabta hoota hay insha Allah soon aap say.

Bholay_Bisray July 11, 2006, 9:41pm 10

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Muzna , sad_affect , Prince Ali ....................... thanks !

Bholay_Bisray July 11, 2006, 9:49pm 11

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Danke Schön !

aap ko kidher say yaad a giya neela rung? wasay yeh jo pak.org ka version hay iss main mughay khuch kurna hii nahi aata. aur ub tu wasay bhi black & white cheesain hi achi lugti hain ~~)

Bholay_Bisray July 11, 2006, 9:50pm 12

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thanks. loog bahut imtehan laytay hain tu soocha atleast wo tu na lay na

EEMAAN July 11, 2006, 9:53pm 13

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Bohat khoob..

Sannan July 13, 2006, 3:41am 14

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*wah wah maar dala zalim ...... nice sharing Bholay *