Mere Sab Tanz Be-asar He Rahe

being_lonely · February 23, 2009, 3:20am

Asalam u Alaikum !
How are you all hope fine shine ! So i m here to share this beautiful ghazal wid u guys/galz ! Hope you all like it !

Gaahe gaahe bas ab yahi ho kya
Tumse milkar bahut khushi ho kya

Mil rahi ho bade tapaak ke saath
Mujhko yaksar bhula chuki ho kya

Yaad hain ab bhi apne khwaab tumhein
Mujhse milkar udaas bhi ho kya

Bas mujhe yunhi ek khyaal aaya
Sochti ho to sochti ho kya

Ab meri koii zindagi hi nahin
Ab bhi tum meri zindagi ho kya

Kya kaha, ishq jaawidaani hai
Aakhri baar mil rahi ho kya

Haan, fizaa yaan ki soyi soyi si hai
To bohat tez roshni ho kya

Mere sab tanz be-asar he rahe
Tum bahut door jaa chuki ho kya

Dil mein ab soz-e-intizaar nahin
Shamm-e-umeed ! bujh gayi ho kya

bEing loNely !!! siD !!!

Shab-e-Hijar · February 23, 2009, 5:02am

Nice1 :k:

Ahmi · February 23, 2009, 5:02am

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Very nice sharing jee....

saqi476 · February 23, 2009, 8:33am

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wah wah.....jaun eliya is the best...thanx a lot for sharing such a beautiful poetry...i loved it

bheegiyaad · February 23, 2009, 11:32am

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interesting !!!..

abeeha · February 24, 2009, 9:11am

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good choice BL......

aeno · February 24, 2009, 6:16pm

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wowwwww its realy nice sid g ;))

Koyal · February 25, 2009, 10:45pm

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nice 1 lonley :)

aabla_pa · February 26, 2009, 4:30am

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[QUOTE]
Bas mujhe yunhi ek khyaal aaya
Sochti ho to sochti ho kya

Ab meri koii zindagi hi nahin
Ab bhi tum meri zindagi ho kya
[/QUOTE]

Good choice SiD. :)

Starlight · February 28, 2009, 6:15am

nice!

muddii · February 28, 2009, 6:56am

Hmmmmm:hmmm:Niceeeeeeeee:sheen:

SinlneR · March 1, 2009, 5:10pm

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bohot khoob....

john eliya surely has a very beautiful style of his own..
thanx alot for sharing!!!

being_lonely · March 1, 2009, 8:42pm

shukriya

thx ahmi

yup Jhon eliya rox

hmmm

thx

jee it is

thanks kuku kahan gayab ho aaj kal

thanks Asad bro

thx

phool

yep he has sinlner thanks for liking n apriciating ma post !

silent_eye · March 2, 2009, 5:02am

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nice :)

Jhanjharewali · March 5, 2009, 2:03am

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loved it sid!!!

being_lonely · March 7, 2009, 4:27am

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Thanks SE n JW !

Heiress1 · March 7, 2009, 8:54pm

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great choice..:k:
bohot acha intakhaab hay

pk786 · March 9, 2009, 11:08pm

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very nice sid ....

being_lonely · March 19, 2009, 7:48am

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Thankew both :)