Mere Mehboob Ki Doli He zara sambhal ke jana,
Ik Lash Saji He Zara Sambhal Ke Jana,
Ankhein asi ki anson ka darya,
chehre pe muskurahat
ke jeenay ka zarya…
dekha jo akhri bar nazar uthake,
ji bhur ke …
aya khial q na iqrar kya,
woh shub thi yeh shaam,
kuch yaad nahi tamam,
hosh jab aya tu raat thi qayam,
zindagi ne phr ik modh naya lya,
safa e zeest ne phr ik qalam naya lya…
likhegi phr ik nai kahani,
mere dil ki baat ashqon ki zabani…
i hope u guys like it i wrote it after a long tym ago 
TLK
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Wow, this is really good JJ . very good flow
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thnx :)
S.786
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zabardust..hy
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very nice :k:
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hello jia bajee 
ap beh lekteh ehyn :AID:
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hehe 4,5 saal pehle yahan sirf meri hi posts hoti thi 
but as tym passed i stoped ryting it on GS…
i ate when ppl say yeh tumne nahi likha copy he 
THNX EVERY ONE
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ye kahan say copy maari hai? :p
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apne deemagh se
TLK
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waisay aap kaa mehboob to mard hu'a naa
wo doli main kiyaa kar raha hai?
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shair nazam yeh ghazal k lie genders important nahi hote koi kisi ke lie bhi likh sakta he :)
Dilsay
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Nice very nice and good to see something from you after a long time
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hmmmmmm achi nazam but kuch rawani ki kami lage
keep it up
nice dear