kisi ko rotay say hansa dai'nakisi bhtaktay ko rah dikha dai'nathokar say kisi ko bacha lai'napyasay ko paani pila dai'na
*bus yehe do char hain khuwab merey *
ager Haqeeqat meiN insan sirf yehi kar lay then they dont anything else jiska ooper aap nay zikr kiya hay, lekin aaj kay dour meiN kam Insan aese nazar atey jo dooroN ki khushi kay liye apni khushi qurban kar dein, kisi ko thokar lagnay say bacha leiN ,kisi rotey ko hunsa deiN:-)anyways Problem girl its very nice poem thanks a lot for sharing:-)
This is excellent expression of reality ...good!!!
But there are methods to enhance the odd reality, like make over, fashion, design, sandles, jootay, hair cut, shampooing, fair-n-lovley'ing thobra, dieting, aerobic, singing in matka, and etc...
ps: you can't find beauty in you, you need to find one who can see ur beauty :-p
ps23: being simple is itself a beauty :-)
ps33: plz ignore all what I said above ... except first and second last line...
shukriya to app jinhoon nay pasand kia hum nay bhala kia kia ?
app sub ki tareef ka or nazam perhnay ka bohat shukriya …: )
fe zamana almiya yehe hay kay taqreerain baatni hussan per hain or ammal zahire per ..behrhal app jaisee sooch rakhnay walay jub tuk hain umeed to qaaim hay : )
This is excellent expression of reality ...good!!!
But there are methods to enhance the odd reality, like make over, fashion, design, sandles, jootay, hair cut, shampooing, fair-n-lovley'ing thobra, dieting, aerobic, singing in matka, and etc...
ps: you can't find beauty in you, you need to find one who can see ur beauty :-p
ps23: being simple is itself a beauty :-)
ps33: plz ignore all what I said above ... except first and second last line...
ohooo Ata jee yahan kahan nikal ayee :P
app nay dekha main kitnee baree shaaire hoon ? cafe say bahir mayre kitnee izzat hay ? lolzzz
baqee jo tips app nay batayee hain us ka shukriya app ki honay wale begum ko post ker doon gee : P
ps123 jee saray PS perh ker ab akhir main ignore ker diya hay ; )
Hazaaron saal nargis, apni be noori pe roti haiBadi mushkil se hota hai chaman mein deedawar paida
lakin mera nam nargis to nahi hay : S ..
ps >safiya is my mother name i love it : )
very nice......!!!!!!!
very thanx : D
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app nay dekha main kitnee baree shaaire hoon ? cafe say bahir mayre kitnee izzat hay ? lolzzz
baqee jo tips app nay batayee hain us ka shukriya app ki honay wale begum ko post ker doon gee : P
ps123 jee saray PS perh ker ab akhir main ignore ker diya hay ; )
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hamara puraanaa koocha tha yeh bhi kabhi, kooch karnay k baad yahan white wash hogaya tha, agar ukhaar sako to deewaron par kaheen kaheen sihahi say likhay kuch bay tarteeb alfaaz nazar aajaingay aap ko bhi :-p
haan aap bohat lambi shaira hain, aap ki lambai cafe Abad say shari-poora tak phaili howi hay, Allah aap ki lambai main din doogni and raat chogni izaafa farmaayay aamin summa amain ...
Baqi sab theek hain, Kalloo-mall-koilay waalay kay huwwaN aik naya koila I mean bacha paida hogaya hay kl shaam ko subah 8 bajay, uss ka naam unhonay koila number 313 rakha hay,
Rehan Hakla and Asif kaana bhi theek hain, aap ko salam bol rahahy hain ...
baqi khana and peena time par, and sonay say pehlay Ayat-ul-Kursi parh kar sona...
Khatt likhti rehna har maheenay...
[QUOTE] baqee jo tips app nay batayee hain us ka shukriya app ki honay wale begum ko post ker doon gee : P
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poem achi behter hi but yeh kiya hi vese agr ap k vajah se kise ko zindgi mile to is se ache bat aur koi nahi ,kabhi 2 dost aese baatein kar jate hein k dukh hota hi Aaj k ddour me koi shaksh bhi dusre ko behter(acha nahi jaanta