Mere guRya....

Suno ye daastaN apni, mere guRya k wadoN ki
muhabbat thee ussay mujh se, ya thee woh pagli dewani?
MaiN kaise bhool paonga, lab-o-rukhsar, gaisoo aur woh bataiN
gawah haiN aaj bhe koil, darakht aur jheel ka paani…
haqeeqat thee ya ik sapna, k jab woh mujh se kehti thee,
jahaN per koi na hoga, tumhara saath maiN dongi,
kabhi jab tum pukarogy, tumhary paas aaoNge,
kahiN na tum baThak jao, tumhara haath thamoNgi,
kisi pal door jao tu, tumhari raah daikhoNgi,
tumhary raastooN maiN, apni palkoN ko bichaooNgi,
muhabbat goud maiN bhar kar, tumhay jhola jhulaaongi…
tumhary aansooN maiN naachty sub ghum
maiN chupkay se chura longi,
tumhary bheeghti palkooN k sub moti,
main dil maiN jazb kar looNgi
tumhay baanhoN maiN bhar kar
sub ghamooN se maiN chupha loNgi
tumhary lub…
gulooN se maiN saja dooNgi,
tumhari chahatooN k aayenoN maiN, shamayN jala dongi,
tumhary paaNooN maiN kaanty na chub jaayeN
khizaN ke raakh maiN rasty bana dongi…
maiN sapno se saja dongi, tumhary neend k dar ko,
sitarooN se maiN bhar dongi, sabhi viraan shamooN ko,
tumhary kaanch k ghar ko maiN shabnam ka bana dongi…
maiN saansoN k tapash se moom kar dongi, tumhary sird jazbooN ko,
tumhary khaab na tooty, maiN saari raat jagoNgi…
zara tum paas tu aao, mera ye haath tu thaamo,
pukaro naam ko mere, in aankhoN maiN zara jhaanko,
k muddat se jo ik faryaad maiN doobi,
tumhari yaad k sehraaoN maiN darya banati haiN,
ye gaisoo, jo hai manand in ghaTaaoN k
ye lab, jo pankhRee ke naazki se bhe dilawar haiN,
ye tum se kuch nahi kehty, sivaye aik jumlay k,
“tumhara saath bus ik ho”, tu sub manzoor hai mujh ko…
qasam hai mujh ko uss Rab ke, maiN har ik dard seH longi,
tumhary saaye maiN jee kar, maiN har dukh ko bhula dongi,
tumhara aastaN bus ho, kahiN na tum bichaR jaao,
tumhe tu mery sub kuch ho, tumhary waasty maiN kuch bhe kar longi,
wafa gar tum karo pori, agar wada nibhao tu….
Kisi ne gar koi patthar uThaya phir, koi bhe rah maiN apni jo aaya tu,
MaiN phir ik hashr kar dongi, ye ghar viraan sub hongy,
Agar bus maiN howa mery, maiN har dar ko miTa dongi,
Mery kiss kaam ke dunya, maiN iss ko he jala dongi.
Mere guRya, mere guRya….
KahaN hai saath woh tera, kahaN hai haath woh tera?
woh palkaiN kiss ke haiN ab, kon jholta hai tera jhoola?
woh mouti jazb kar lo na, woh ghum kab tum churaogi?
woh shamayN kab jalogi, woh rasty kab banaogi?
Mere jazbooN ka kya hoga, mere sapno ka kya hoga?
Wafa tu aaj bhe qaim hai, phir qasmooN ko kioN touRa…
Mere dunya jala dali, Yeh ghar viraan kar dala…

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Re: Mere guRya…

Ye itni Lambi Nazam paRhay ga kaun :crying:

I dont think you have work to do now adays na :rolleyes:

Re: Mere guRya....

Wow very nice poem ASA , thanks for sharing:-)

Re: Mere guRya…

maiN ne bouhat koshish ke k darya ko koozy maiN band kar dooN… laiken iss baar dary main bouhat tofan aya hai… paRhne k baad he pata chaly ga..

jee bilkul aap ne sahi farmaya… aaj kal i dont have ne thing to do WHOLE nite.. :frowning:

Re: Mere guRya…

Thanks Gul… :flower2:

GS paRhne walay aisay hoty haiN… actully paRhne k ley banday ko touRa sa baa-zoq hona chahey.. :smiley:

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tumhary paaNooN maiN kaanty na chub jaayeN
khizaN ke raakh maiN rasty bana dongi…
maiN sapno se saja dongi, tumhary neend k dar ko,
**sitarooN se maiN bhar dongi, sabhi viraan shamooN ko, **
tumhary kaanch k ghar ko maiN shabnam ka bana dongi…
maiN saansoN k tapash se moom kar dongi, tumhary sird jazbooN ko,
tumhary khaab na tooty, maiN saari raat jagoNgi

Its Beautiful yar… Ur Getting Better Day by Day… Its Zabardast… :flower1:

And… I am not BadZoq at all okie… Coz.. Yesterday meray paas Time naheeN tha tou I could’t read… :snooty:

Re: Mere guRya…

*Aur bhi dukh hai zamaney meiN mohabbat key siwa…

Pyar sey bhi zaroori kayi kaam haiN…
Pyar sab kuch nahiN ziNdagi key liye… *

It’s a lovely and well-developed poem AsSweetAs… Keep it up and thank you for sharing with us! :slight_smile:

Re: Mere guRya....

Aap nay is nazm ko buhat khoobsurti say bayan kia hay, jazbay tu sub he rakhtay hein unhein alfaz mein samo ker bayan kerna sub k liye mumkin nahu!!

Sirf yeh keh sakti hoon k KHOOBSURAT...
Jazbay kabhi zaya nahi hutay, yaad rakhiyee ga!

Fara

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Thanks Khamoshi… not only for liking bulke for ur mufeed mashwar… laiken still its confusing aik taraf aap mana kar rahi ho…
**Aur bhi dukh hai zamaney meiN mohabbat key siwa…

Pyar sab kuch nahiN ziNdagi key liye… **

aur dosre taraf u r saying “keep it up”.. :confused:

mera nahi khyal k maiN aur likh sakoNga.. :frowning:

Re: Mere guRya…

Bouhat bouhat shukria Fara sahiba..

first of All Welcome to GS :flower2:
apna pehla post mere thread maiN kar k mere izzatafzai ka bouhat bouhat shukria..

Re: Mere guRya…

Taareef ke liay alfaz bohat kum hain, bus yehi hay:

Main us ka naam na loon phir bhi log pehchanaiN
ke aap apna taa’ruff hawa bahara ki hay

Friend4u4ever

Re: Mere guRya....

Thanks ahm4me

arz kia hai....
kobako phail gaye baat shanasae ke
uss ne kushbo ke tarha mere pazeraye ke

Re: Mere guRya....

zabardast mashaALLAH ,,,khuday day nora taraqqi darki AAMEEN summa AAMEEN

Re: Mere guRya…

Woh mashwara nahiN tha mera… maiN to faqat apni nuqta-e-nazar ka izhaar kar rahi thi… Zara jazbaati ho key kehdaala… Aap mashAllah sey kaafi baa-zauq haiN aur bahut acha likhtey haiN.. ek meri waja sey is zauq ka gala mat dabayeiN… :slight_smile:

Re: Mere guRya…

deera manana roora, bus che staso duagane we nu :insha: za ba hameesha ta taraqqi pa laar rawan yem…

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Re: Mere guRya…

bouhat bouhat shukria… :flower2:

nahi nahi.. maiN aap ke wajah se aisa nahi kar raha… bus waise he… iss poem k baad aur likhne ko dil nahi kar raha… :frowning:

Re: Mere guRya…

Aapki kahani ka to waqa’ee din-ba-din rukh badal gaya :frowning:

Cheer up… hota hai aisa bhi kabhi kabhi… ziNdagi itni asaaN hoti to hum issey ziNdagi na kehtey… A flower for you :flower1:

Re: Mere guRya....

Wah Jeee buhat hi khooob

ek ek lafz aap kay jazbaat ki akaasi ker raha hai
Rab Tallah aap ko Dheeron sukh aur khushiyan naseeb karay Ameen

Re: Mere guRya…

kahani nahi zindagi ne rukh badla hai…

mashAllah mujhay tu ab apni zindagi bouhat asaan lag rahi hai… :hula:

Thanks … Garden for u… :flower1::flower2::flower2:

Re: Mere guRya…

bouhat bouhat shukria…

Aamin Summa aamin… agar ye khushyaN mujhay kisi k roop maiN bhe mil jaye tu theek hai.. :blush: