Mere ghazal ka aik shair.

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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When I was in matric I wrote some ghazals, I did not save those and I remember just one shair of one ghazal. I hope you like it.

Bagh main tootee bol raha hay
mairee awaaz us say hum ahang hay.

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Re: Mere ghazal ka aik shair.

can u plz translate

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I can translate but it will not carry the whole message. Tootee or tootey is a bird but it is symbol of free spirit in Urdu poetry.
Loosly translated it will mean I am as free spirited as a tootee.

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Re: Mere ghazal ka aik shair.

i got it,its v nice.