mere DuaaoN main asar hay k nahi hay

chehray pe gard pairoon main safar hay k nahi hay
tu daikh k meri manzil pe nazar hay k nahi hay!

jaa apnay liye dhoond lay kisi ehl-e-mahal ko
na janay meri qismat main ghar hay k nahi hay

teray pas hain abhi aur dard to wo bhee mujhay day
na pooch k mujh main aur sabar hay k nahi hay

meri neendain to mar chuki hain rat-jagoon kay haath
teray khuaaboon ko bhee koi aesa dar hay k nahi hay!

ye soch k ley aya hoon main jangal say kuch jugnoo
najanay ab qismat main sahar hay k nahi hay

tu dekh mera shaoq, meri shikastoon ko na dekh
pairon taley teray ghar ki dagar hay k nahi hay!

maanga hay tujhay Rub say k ik zid si hay kub say
dekhoon to meri duaoon main asar hay k nahi hay!

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maanga hay tujhay Rub say k ik zid si hay kub say
dekhoon to meri duaoon main asar hay k nahi hay!

Wah PG Buhat hi khub Zabardast:lajawab:
{Wasy aysi duaon ka jwab Allah maff kry aksar yeh hota hy ky
Jaaaaaaaaaa apni hasratoon py ansoo bha ky so jaaaa}

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[quote]
ye soch k ley aya hoon main jangal say kuch jugnoo
najanay ab qismat main sahar hay k nahi hay

tu dekh mera shaoq, meri shikastoon ko na dekh
pairon taley teray ghar ki dagar hay k nahi hay!

maanga hay tujhay Rub say k ik zid si hay kub say
dekhoon to meri duaoon main asar hay k nahi hay
[/quote]

buhat umda intikhab problem girl

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[quote]
Wah PG Buhat hi khub Zabardast
{Wasy aysi duaon ka jwab Allah maff kry aksar yeh hota hy ky
Jaaaaaaaaaa apni hasratoon py ansoo bha ky so jaaaa}
[/quote]
**
goodnews>
nahi u didnt got that shair then

kissi cheez ko musalsal mangna Allah ko bohat pasand hay or is main jo ZId ka zikkar hay woh Allah say nahi apnay app say hay ...k man yeh dua mang mang kay kabhi nahi thakoon ga .....yahan tuk k Allah in main assar dal day
or sub say behtreen dua he woh hay jis main Dawam ho : )

Ehsas > shukriya pasandeedge ka

Re: mere DuaaoN main asar hay k nahi hay

tu dekh mera shaoq, meri shikastoon ko na dekh
pairon taley teray ghar ki dagar hay k nahi hay!

buhat khoooooob

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buhut khoob ji :)

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BEautiful!! who is the poet? thanks for sharing =)

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^ i dont know

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:k:

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Buhat hi zabardast.
maanga hay tujhay Rub say k ik zid si hay kub say
dekhoon to meri duaoon main asar hay k nahi hay! <!-- / message -->

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Perhaps I could help. Here is the source :slight_smile:

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very nice PG

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superb Problem GIrl

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oh my God its ur poem : O : O : O

well its amazing ... well yeah i got this poem from Aceones.long time ago when i was not joined GS ..and now i saw his reply in ur thread .

awesome ..its brillient .really beautifull .

yeh to batain jo tashreeh maini goodnews ko app kay akhre shair ke ker k dee hay woh sahee thee ??

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mashAllah tu ye ap ki ghazal hai :smiley: … luvdd itt… :flower1: thanks again P_G for sharing :smiley: :k:

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Ji Problem_girl, aap ney sahi tashreeh ki hey :k::slight_smile:

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Yar! jab woh bnda hi kisi or ka ho jay tu phir?? Phir os ko mangan aos ki bivi ky sath ziadti hy:D Wasy yeh mazaq nahi what was my way of looking this thing and Dwam os dua ko hota hy jehan ap Allah or os ky rab ki Muhabat mang rahy hain Rab razi tu sab razi han wahan Mayoos mat hu or yeh ky Aik ya do duain puri nahi hoin tu bnda kahy ab dua hi nahi krni yeh ghalat hy zaroori nahi her dua puri ho woh sunta hy sunao os ko khub, Qabool krna na krn aos pr hy or mayoos nahi hona chahy Main muttafiq hon magar baz duain aysi hoti hai n jysi situation main nybiyan ki ky phir woh dua mangna zidati or kisi ky sath buinsafi ka sabab bnta hy or jab os pehli bivi ( Log Mehboba sunna kehn azida pasand krty hain BIVI is forbidden here) sy qatta taluq kr ly tu kia hal hota hy os ka or hamara muashra kehtahy tum main hi gutts nahi thy sanbhalny ky shohar ko and then a woman could feel" Ja apni hasrton py ansoo beha ky so ja":hehe:

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Problem _girl yeh to batain jo tashreeh maini goodnews ko app kay akhre shair ke ker k dee hay woh sahee thee ??

Tumhara Nuqtay nazar drust hu tu hu magar
Yar! hamara bhi nuqtay Nazar hy:smokin:

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Goodnews> aaaaaaaah we r talking about Amal shairs not our views

shaair shair main kia kehna chahta hay yeh batana perta hay na kay yeh hum kia kehna chahtay hain : )

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maanga hay tujhay Rub say k ik zid si hay kub say
dekhoon to meri duaoon main asar hay k nahi hay

ahemm yaar.. ab sach mien yaha dil lag gaya..
yaha to sab ek se bhar kar ek hain..
tareef karo to kitni kaor..
well any ways.. seriously very nice ghazal..
bohot khoob..