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Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Pus.e.deewaar.e.gham utthay thay kabhi
Iss tarah yaar hum utthay thay kabhi

Yaad rakhtee hai unnko tanhaee
Dil peh jo jo situm utthay thay kabhi

DaastaaN likh gaey haiN chehray per
Khawaab meiN jo a’lam utthay thay kabhi

Kuch nahiN yaad juzz woh ek manzer
lay kay palkaiN woh num utthay thay kabhi

Palkain chunnti haiN unnkay naqsh :khalish:
Bhool meiN jo qadam utthay thay kabhi

hummay tum say pyar kitna :)yae hum nahe jantay:)

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roll No 2629 buhat khube.

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thanks 4 posting

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very nice

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keep up the good work

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MÙhb@t kÀ ÃnÒkhå SîÌSîÎã Hãï
KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kîBàÎå H@ï

4

Buhat Khoob.

I'm Gonna Be The Champ
The Way I Wanna Be

Rude Boyz Rulez

5

thanks

hummay tum say pyar kitna :)yae hum nahe jantay:)

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nice...

---~---Maria---~---
~Kiya haaq wo jeena hai jo apnay hi liyay ho
Khud mit kar kisi aur ko mitnay se bacha lay~

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Very nice! :)

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Very nice!

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Is it progress when a cannibal uses a knife and fork?

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wowww..great job..app bohat achi shair ban sakti hain..it seems like that

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:slight_smile:

~yeh noor ke sholay uthtay hain, mera hee dil garmanay ko
jo bijli ufak main chamki hai, chamki hai mere taRpanay ko~

Apnay akailay pan ka main kis say gila karoon
Jis ko bhi murh kay daikha woh tanhayOon maiN hay~

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Nice one 2629

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thanks

hummay tum say pyar kitna :)yae hum nahe jantay:)

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2629

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Bohat khoob hope you will keep posting your work

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very nice 2629 uncle

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~HaY JaZbA JuNoOn ToU HiMmAt Na HaAr JuStUjOo Jo KaRaY Wo ChUaY AsMaAn, MeHnAt ApNi HoGi PeHcHaAn KaBhI Na BhUlO, SaB Ki NaZrOn MaIn.. PAKISTAN KaBhI Na BhUlO, PAKISTAN HaI TuMhArA, PAKISTAN HaI HumArA~

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thanks 4 all
especially thanks XChorniX ;p

hummay tum say pyar kitna :)yae hum nahe jantay:)

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ju iz alwayz belcome uncle

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~HaY JaZbA JuNoOn ToU HiMmAt Na HaAr JuStUjOo Jo KaRaY Wo ChUaY AsMaAn, MeHnAt ApNi HoGi PeHcHaAn KaBhI Na BhUlO, SaB Ki NaZrOn MaIn.. PAKISTAN KaBhI Na BhUlO, PAKISTAN HaI TuMhArA, PAKISTAN HaI HumArA~

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ju iz alwayz belcome uncle

ok baeta jee

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hummay tum say pyar kitna :)yae hum nahe jantay:)

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bohat kHoob

Yaad rakhtee hai unnko tanhaee
Dil peh jo jo situm utthay thay kabhi

DaastaaN likh gaey haiN chehray per
Khawaab meiN jo a'lam utthay thay kabhi

Kuch nahiN yaad juzz woh ek manzer
lay kay palkaiN woh num utthay thay kabhi

Daiyaar-e-MagHrib se jaane walo!daiyaar-e-Mashriq ke BaasioN ko
Kisi gHareeb-ul-Watan Musafir ki ChaahtoN ka salaam kehnaa
Hamaare Shaam-o-Sehar ka keya Haal poocHte ho ke lam'haa lam'haa
Naseeb in ka bana rahe haiN tumhaare hi Sub'ho Shaam kehnaa

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great job

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Kay hum tu Dhoop main baarishh kay woh qatray hain jo gir ker, dar-o-deevar per hi sookh jaatay hain…