***wohi gali'aaN wohi koochay wohi saRdi ka moasam hai***
***isi andaaz se apna nizaam-e-zeest baRham hai***
ye husan-e-itfaaq aisa k nikhRi chandni bhi hai wohi haR simat wayRani udasi tashnaghi see hai
wohi bheer soochooN ki wohi tanhaee’aN phiR se musafiR ajnabi aur dasht ki pinhaaee’aN phiR se
meRi aankhooN maiN wo ik lamha moajood ab bhi hai wo zinda raat meRay saath laa’khooN baaR jaaghi hai
kisi ne raat ki tanhaa’ee maiN saR ghoshi’aN ki thei kisi ki naRam guftaaRi ne dil ko loori’aaN de thei
kisi ne meRi tanhaa’ee ka saaRa kaRab banta tha kisi ne raat ki chunRi maiN roshaN chaad tanka tha
chamaktay jugno’ooN ka ik sail bakhsha tha raatooN ko dhaRakta sa naya unwaaN dee’ya tha meRay khawabooN ko
meRay sheRooN maiN wo alhaam ki suRat maiN utRa tha maa’ni buN k jo lufzooN maiN pahli baaR dhaRka tha
wo jis k honay se zindghi naghma saraa’ee hai isay kahNa k dekho phir Nikami loat aa’ee hai
Amal
February 11, 2007, 2:34pm
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NikamiJano:
***wohi gali'aaN wohi koochay wohi saRdi ka moasam hai***
***isi andaaz se apna nizaam-e-zeest baRham hai***
ye husan-e-itfaaq aisa k nikhRi chandni bhi hai wohi haR simat wayRani udasi tashnaghi see hai
wohi bheer soochooN ki wohi tanhaee’aN phiR se musafiR ajnabi aur dasht ki pinhaaee’aN phiR se
meRi aankhooN maiN wo ik lamha moajood ab bhi hai wo zinda raat meRay saath laa’khooN baaR jaaghi hai
kisi ne raat ki tanhaa’ee maiN saR ghoshi’aN ki thei kisi ki naRam guftaaRi ne dil ko loori’aaN de thei
kisi ne meRi tanhaa’ee ka saaRa kaRab banta tha kisi ne raat ki chunRi maiN roshaN chaad tanka tha
chamaktay jugno’ooN ka ik sail bakhsha tha raatooN ko dhaRakta sa naya unwaaN dee’ya tha meRay khawabooN ko
meRay sheRooN maiN wo alhaam ki suRat maiN utRa tha maa’ni buN k jo lufzooN maiN pahli baaR dhaRka tha
wo jis k honay se zindghi naghma saraa’ee hai isay kahNa k dekho phir Nikami loat aa’ee hai
Hmmm…NikamiJi kahaN chupi beitthi theiN aap
Amal
February 11, 2007, 2:37pm
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NikamiJano:
***wohi gali'aaN wohi koochay wohi saRdi ka moasam hai***
***isi andaaz se apna nizaam-e-zeest baRham hai***
ye husan-e-itfaaq aisa k nikhRi chandni bhi hai wohi haR simat wayRani udasi tashnaghi see hai
wohi bheer soochooN ki wohi tanhaee’aN phiR se musafiR ajnabi aur dasht ki pinhaaee’aN phiR se
meRi aankhooN maiN wo ik lamha moajood ab bhi hai wo zinda raat meRay saath laa’khooN baaR jaaghi hai
kisi ne raat ki tanhaa’ee maiN saR ghoshi’aN ki thei kisi ki naRam guftaaRi ne dil ko loori’aaN de thei
kisi ne meRi tanhaa’ee ka saaRa kaRab banta tha kisi ne raat ki chunRi maiN roshaN chaad tanka tha
chamaktay jugno’ooN ka ik sail bakhsha tha raatooN ko dhaRakta sa naya unwaaN dee’ya tha meRay khawabooN ko
meRay sheRooN maiN wo alhaam ki suRat maiN utRa tha maa’ni buN k jo lufzooN maiN pahli baaR dhaRka tha
wo jis k honay se zindghi naghma saraa’ee hai isay kahNa k dekho phir Nikami loat aa’ee hai
Simply excellent poem NikamiJi You have always been unbelievably good :k: Har sheir hi bohat khoob hey, an all-gem-fitted poem. Thanx a million for sharing this beauty with us
Re: meRay sheRooN maiN wo al’haam ki suRat maiN utRa tha
apni asi kismat kaha k ap ki tarha likh sakay bus lufz ki heri pheri ki hia wahan shaa’er ka naam nahi tha soocha gzal ko aik naya rang dya a jaiey jo bhool gaye nikami ko un ko yaad dila dya jaiey k k nikami ki tashraaf a chuki hia:blush: k tumhiN yaad ho k na yaad ho
Re: meRay sheRooN maiN wo al’haam ki suRat maiN utRa tha
ab subha subha itni b taa’Reef na kaRaiN na
fghd
February 11, 2007, 3:59pm
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meRay sheRooN maiN wo alhaam ki suRat maiN utRa tha maa’ni buN k jo lufzooN maiN pahli baaR dhaRka tha
wo jis k honay se zindghi naghma saraa’ee hai
aray wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh :k:****
Re: meRay sheRooN maiN wo al'haam ki suRat maiN utRa tha
^ avataar nahi dekha ka bikul same he hia koi bhi faraq nahi :D
Re: meRay sheRooN maiN wo al'haam ki suRat maiN utRa tha
buhat achi ghazal post ki hey Nikami ji, thanku for sharing this beauty:-)
AQ
February 12, 2007, 3:15pm
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nice poem.. :)
you dun consider yourself as one of the Shora'-e-Gupshup?
Re: meRay sheRooN maiN wo al’haam ki suRat maiN utRa tha
jano gi wasay to sari ghazal bohat hi achi hai but this shair is simplyyyy beautiful!!!
wohi bheer soochooN ki wohi tanhaee'aN phiR se
musafiR ajnabi aur dasht ki pinhaaee'aN phiR se
:k:
Re: meRay sheRooN maiN wo al'haam ki suRat maiN utRa tha
buhat achi ghazal post ki hey Nikami ji, thanku for sharing this beauty:-)
thanks Gul :)
Re: meRay sheRooN maiN wo al'haam ki suRat maiN utRa tha
you dun consider yourself as one of the Shora'-e-Gupshup?
it's not mine AQ...wo jus sardi ki jaga nikami likh dya mun main aya tu :p
Re: meRay sheRooN maiN wo al’haam ki suRat maiN utRa tha
aisa keoN phiR se shab…:halo:
AQ
February 13, 2007, 5:20pm
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it's not mine AQ...wo jus sardi ki jaga nikami likh dya mun main aya tu :p
Koyal
February 13, 2007, 10:15pm
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AQ
February 13, 2007, 10:30pm
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ghalat nick saY post kar diyaa? :)
Koyal
February 14, 2007, 4:29am
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:halo: isi leay ap abhi taak kanwaray phir rahyak aik shaki mizaj admi Allah reham karey ap ki honay wali per
aatir
February 14, 2007, 9:19am
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nikamijano kay liay
main poochta hoon mairey galeey main aaiy kuoon
alata
February 14, 2007, 9:26am
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main poochta hoon mairey galeey main aaiy kuoon
jis dakyaia kay pass terey chtyaan na hoon
tO GIVE UWarning Notice
WiseGuy
February 14, 2007, 11:46am
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Wah Jano jee aap tu chaa gayee :)
Hum logoN sey likhwa, likhwa kar thaka diya aur apna likha aaj share kar rahi heiN aap hum sey 
:halo: