SJ
June 21, 2007, 7:32am
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its one of my favourites!!!
hope u will like it!
Meray mah-o- saal k beech mein…
MMeray mah-o-saal kay beech mein ,koi aisa lamha gaaya nahin
Teraa naam mein nay liya nahin tujhay, yaad mein nay kiya nahin
Meraa safar adhora he rah gaya,Mujhay manzilon ki khabar nahin
Mein nay hamsafar ussay mana tha mera sath jis nay diya nahin
Yahan har qadam pay hain hadsay,ye khayal dil ko thaka gaya
Yeh safar k siraat-e-taveel hai,abhi ek qadam tak utha nahin
Koi aik aansoo tu aisaa day,dar-o-baam apnaay saja lon mein
Tujhay kya khabar maree rah mein,koi taara jugnoo diyaa nahin
Yeh maree anaa kee hai sar-kaashi,jo wassf aisaa sikhaa gae
Mein woh darya hon jo gira nahin,wo pahaar honjo hilla nahin
Koi beyqararee se aj bhi,meray dil mein khaar hai khanchtee
Koi dard tha joo dabaa nahin,koi ansoo tha jo bahaa nahin
Ussay baad barson k dekh kay,yon he aik lamhay ko kya hoa
Koi saans thee jo chalee nahin,koi zabbt thaa jo hoa nahin
Re: meray mah-o- saal k beech mein....................
Sonia_Jee, It's Pretty Good.. :)
PS: Mujhe Ko Bata De Ke Emoticons Kese Atay Hain Yahan :(
SJ
June 21, 2007, 8:07am
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Re: meray mah-o- saal k beech mein....................
Which emotionz u r talking abt dear???
Re: meray mah-o- saal k beech mein....................
Ap Ne Yeh Nazm Share Karai Thee Na..
Maree jaa'n theek kahtee ho
hamaree iss mohabat ka
bhala kya faida ho ga
hamaray darmiyan jo dorian hain
kam nahinhon ge
kabhi barish kay mausam mein
hamesha sath rahnay ki
jo khahish dil mein jagee the
jo sapnay hum nay dekhay thay
woh sapnay toot jayin gay
maree jaa'n theek kahtee ho
muqadar k likhay ko hi agar tasleem karna hai
tu aisee mohabat ka
koi bhi faida kaisa?
magar iss ko agar chaho
tu maree bay basee kah lo
mujhay tum say mohabat hai
Its Awesome :)
PS: Emoticons like FLower wala, gussay wala, no no wala, Yes wala.. Blush wala :$
SJ
June 21, 2007, 8:42am
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Re: meray mah-o- saal k beech mein....................
quik reply ............mein message board k neechay...........................Post quick reply ............AUR..........Go advance hain..........go advance lain............Smilez k sath "more" likha hai...........more par click karain..............u will find those smiliez there
:)
Re: meray mah-o- saal k beech mein....................
nahi mila :$
SJ
June 21, 2007, 8:52am
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Re: meray mah-o- saal k beech mein....................
nahi mila :$
try karain phir saay!!!!!!!!
Re: meray mah-o- saal k beech mein....................
:)
Re: meray mah-o- saal k beech mein....................
:'(
Aqls
June 21, 2007, 10:37am
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Re: meray mah-o- saal k beech mein....................
Bohat hi zabardast..
sonia aapko agar shayar ka naam pata ho tau plss bataiyega..
i m waiting
SJ
June 21, 2007, 11:10am
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Re: meray mah-o- saal k beech mein....................
Bohat hi zabardast..
sonia aapko agar shayar ka naam pata ho tau plss bataiyega..
i m waiting
Sis i Dnt know the name of its poet!!!!
:)
Re: meray mah-o- saal k beech mein…
its one of my favourites!!!
hope u will like it!
Meray mah-o- saal k beech mein…
MMeray mah-o-saal kay beech mein ,koi aisa lamha gaaya nahin
Teraa naam mein nay liya nahin tujhay, yaad mein nay kiya nahin
Meraa safar adhora he rah gaya,Mujhay manzilon ki khabar nahin
Mein nay hamsafar ussay mana tha mera sath jis nay diya nahin
Yahan har qadam pay hain hadsay,ye khayal dil ko thaka gaya
Yeh safar k siraat-e-taveel hai,abhi ek qadam tak utha nahin
Koi aik aansoo tu aisaa day,dar-o-baam apnaay saja lon mein
Tujhay kya khabar maree rah mein,koi taara jugnoo diyaa nahin
Yeh maree anaa kee hai sar-kaashi,jo wassf aisaa sikhaa gae
Mein woh darya hon jo gira nahin,wo pahaar honjo hilla nahin
Koi beyqararee se aj bhi,meray dil mein khaar hai khanchtee
Koi dard tha joo dabaa nahin,koi ansoo tha jo bahaa nahin
Ussay baad barson k dekh kay,yon he aik lamhay ko kya hoa
Koi saans thee jo chalee nahin,koi zabbt thaa jo hoa nahin
**waaah sonia sis…maza aa gaya isse parh ke **
Re: meray mah-o- saal k beech mein…
Umda Ghazal ! kEep GoiNg Sj :k:
SJ
June 21, 2007, 6:18pm
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umeed hai aap ka shikwa door ho gaya ho ga kay main ghazals share nahi kertee hoon
thanks 4 liking the ghazal
Re: meray mah-o- saal k beech mein…
beautifull sonia g :k:
Koyal
June 22, 2007, 4:11am
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jitni dafa b parho aisay lagta pahli dafa parhi :)
SJ
June 22, 2007, 9:42am
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Shab-e-Hijar:
beautifull sonia g :k:
Thanx Dear!!!
Re: meray mah-o- saal k beech mein....................
nice:)
Re: meray mah-o- saal k beech mein....................
Buhat achi ghazal hey Sonia, thanks for sharing:-)