Meray Jaan-o-Dil Se Qareeb-Terr..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Aik HAMD Jo Mainay Likhi Thee.. Infact, Yuun Kehna Behtar Hoga Ke Khudd Se Meray Zehen Main Aagai Thee..

"Meray Jaan-o-Dil Se Qareeb-Terr
Meri Dharkanon Se Juda Nahin

Karay Dar-Guzar Wo Khata-ain Sab
Kabhi Hota Mujh Se Khafa Nahin

Mera Rub Wo Rub-e-Kareem Hai
Nahin, Koi Uss Ke Siwa Nahin."

(Ahmer)

Umeed Hai Ap Sab Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

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Re: Meray Jaan-o-Dil Se Qareeb-Terr..

Wow mashallah bohat achi koshish hai.
Laykin agar aap ki apni hai to is ko Sho’ra-Gupshup mein post kertay.
Nice. :lajawab:

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Re: Meray Jaan-o-Dil Se Qareeb-Terr..

Shukriya Asma.. Tareef Ke Leay..

Jee Yeh Meri Apni He Nazm Hai.. Umm.. Darasal Iss Community Main Naya Hoon Na Main Jabhi Didn't Know.. :$

Wese Mainay Apni Aik Nazm Kal Bhi Post Ki Thee.. "Ek Teray Rooth Janay Se" Ke Unwaan Se.. :$

I Hope Ke I didnt Break Any Rule.. :$

Khush Rahain,

fraaandship a pretty gal
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Re: Meray Jaan-o-Dil Se Qareeb-Terr..

No, I dont think u hav broken any rule.
Anyway Welcome to GS :bb:
Hope u enjoy ur stay here.
Keep on sharing ur beautiful verses, the other one u mentioned “Ek teray rooth janay say” is also really really awesome.

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Re: Meray Jaan-o-Dil Se Qareeb-Terr..

Buhat Buhat Shukria.. Main Ayenda Bhi Koshish Karoonga Ke Main Iss Forum Ki Collection Main Acha Izafa Karoon..

Btw.. I have been really a big big fan of this forum.. :$.. Mainay Yahan Se buhat sari nazmain apne paas zakheera ki hain.. blush

Khush Rahain,

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Re: Meray Jaan-o-Dil Se Qareeb-Terr..

very nice

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Re: Meray Jaan-o-Dil Se Qareeb-Terr..

Mashallah
Zabardast

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Re: Meray Jaan-o-Dil Se Qareeb-Terr..

bohat hi khooob surat **
**mashaALLAH :-)

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Re: Meray Jaan-o-Dil Se Qareeb-Terr..

Blush

Shukria..

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Re: Meray Jaan-o-Dil Se Qareeb-Terr..

nice poetry and welcome in gs keep sending more we r waiting