Meray Humsafar

[Black_Mamba]

zindagi ki rah par
hum thay teenoN humsafar
ghum bhi tha khushi bhi thi
rah thi wo pur khatar
ghum ne mujh se yooN kaha
maiN hooN tera rahnuma
ye khushi teri nahiN
kiss ki ye hui yahaN?
jo raha hai khush yahaN
bhoola apnay Rab ko hai
ghum se hai ye bandagi
ghum se hai ye zindagi
pal ko saath degi ye
phir ye choR jaye gi
har qadam pe jhoota ik,
khwab ye dikhaye gi

ye suna khushi ne tau
ihtejaj yooN kiya
mera haath tham kar
phir kalam yooN kiya
ghum ki baat maan kar
khud ko kyoN rulatay ho?
zindagi ki laz’zataiN
ghum maiN kyoN gaNwatay ho?
har khushi maiN rang hai
zindagi ki chah ka
ghum faqat andhaira hai
zindagi ki raaH ka
ghum se mayusi milay
mujh se zindagi milay
ghum ke saath jo chalay
bus ussi ka ho chalay

kuch samajh saka na maiN
ghum ki na khushi ki baat
na samajh saka maiN ye,
kiss ne di hai kiss ko maat
kiss ko saath le chaloN?
kiss ko choR dooN yahaN?
unko ko laRta choR kar
maiN wahaN se chal paRa
maiN chala wahaN se tau
wo bhi saath chal paRay
do qadam chalay na thay
donoN phir se laR paRay
zindagi ki raah par
phir thay teenoN humsafar
ghum bhi tha khushi bhi thee
raah thee wo pur khatar.
(Black Mamba)

[HeArT_HaCKeR]

Boht khoob Mamba bhaiii :k:

[chodhry]

yaaar wah kia baat keh dee hey love ya for it

[DiYa]

nice

[AQ]

sweet yet sour :)

thanks for sharing such beautiful piece of writting.

[Black_Mamba]

*Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *
Boht khoob Mamba bhaiii :k:

:flo wer1:

Thanks Alot Behna.

*Originally posted by chodhry: *
:kis s: yaaar wah kia baat keh dee hey love ya for it

Thanks alot for appreciating brother

[Black_Mamba]

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Originally posted by DiYa: *
nice
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Thanks

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Anwaar Qureshi: *
sweet yet sour :)

thanks for sharing such beautiful piece of writting.
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Thanks for liking Anwaar bhai. :)

[blushing_vision]

kya baat hai :)

[Black_Mamba]

*Originally posted by blushing_vision: *
kya baat hai

kya baat hai?

[Muslim_Queen]

Nice.

[Azad]

Cha gay ho bhai

[Black_Mamba]

*Originally posted by Muslim_Queen: *
Nice.

Thanks

*Originally posted by Azad: *
Cha gay ho bhai

Qasam se Azad bhai, ye afwaH dushmanoN ki uRai hui hai. maiN nahiN hooN.

[cuteepie]

very nice :k:

[Black_Mamba]

*Originally posted by cuteepie: *
very nice :k:

Thanks cutie

[JonyBr]

BM excellent peice of writting. Idea, imagination, words as well as the way its been told.

I will definatly vote for it if we have to choose few best poems of the year :k:

[Minerva]

BM, thats a beautifully written piece. awesome

[koiDost]

lo kar lo gal:smack2: hum sumjhay hum nay aap ki yeh post check kar li …khair

LaLay Bahut aala andaz hai tumhara :k:

[Jaan_Lewaa]

superbbbbb:k:

[Black_Mamba]

*Originally posted by JonyBr: *
BM excellent peice of writting. Idea, imagination, words as well as the way its been told.

I will definatly vote for it if we have to choose few best poems of the year :k:

Thanks alot Jony bhai. Comming from you, its a great compliment for me.

*Originally posted by Minerva: *
BM, thats a beautifully written piece. awesome

Thanks alot Minerva. So nice of you.

[Black_Mamba]

*Originally posted by koiDost: *
lo kar lo gal:sm ack2: hum sumjhay hum nay aap ki yeh post check kar li …khair

LaLay Bahut aala andaz hai tumhara :k : : )

thanks alot Waseem bhai.

mera andaz? ya meri nazm ka?

*Originally posted by Jaan Lewaa: *
superbbbbb:k:

Thanks Jaan Lewaa bhai.