meray hoontooN se muR'da manzrooN ko lufz miltey haiN

***mujhay parhany ko bethay ho*** ***tu aa'nakhIn haath pe rakh lo*** ***kaho hansta huwa tum ne kabhi badal ko dekha hai*** ***kabhi bijli k damaN se mahak uthi hia phoolooN ki*** ***samadar doob janay ko kabhi damaN maiN utra hai*** ***mujhay parhnay agar betho percha'eyooN ko mut dekho*** ***meray hoontooN se muR'da manzrooN ko lufz miltey haiN*** ***meray parhtey huwey hatooN pe rakhi aankh bah niqaly***

tu hans daiNa

Re: meray hoontooN se muR’da manzrooN ko lufz miltey haiN

ye to bari khoofnat poem hai koyal jano :frowning:

Re: meray hoontooN se muR'da manzrooN ko lufz miltey haiN

Toba kitni mushkil haiN Koyal aap, kitna mushkil hai aap ko paRhna.

Re: meray hoontooN se muR’da manzrooN ko lufz miltey haiN

**I like it **
**its nice **
thanks 4 sharing :bb:

Re: meray hoontooN se muR'da manzrooN ko lufz miltey haiN

:~(

Re: meray hoontooN se muR’da manzrooN ko lufz miltey haiN

:halo4::pagli::naak:

Re: meray hoontooN se muR’da manzrooN ko lufz miltey haiN

:halo4:

Re: meray hoontooN se muR’da manzrooN ko lufz miltey haiN

lakiN parh tu leea na :halo4:

Re: meray hoontooN se muR'da manzrooN ko lufz miltey haiN

Koyal,
this is morbid, dismal and bleak.
as a true keeper of a promise, the protagonist will feel so dejected.
on the contrary, it must survive to live the dignity of one sided resolve to be ever present, to enable a realization of what got bitterly mistook, and not foresaken.

best,

Dushwari

Re: meray hoontooN se muR'da manzrooN ko lufz miltey haiN

thanks :)

Re: meray hoontooN se muR'da manzrooN ko lufz miltey haiN

nice

Re: meray hoontooN se muR’da manzrooN ko lufz miltey haiN

nice :k:

Re: meray hoontooN se muR'da manzrooN ko lufz miltey haiN

thanks :)

Re: meray hoontooN se muR’da manzrooN ko lufz miltey haiN

:slight_smile: