~~Meray Charagar~~

**Meray charagar yeh dua’a tu day
Mujhay koi tumse mila tu day

Wu nagar nagar tumhein khojna
Yeh haw’a bhee tera pata tu day

Meray khuwa’b meri hikayatein
Kabhi sun sakay tu sad’a tu day

Meray khoaf aur meray wahimay
Koi kash inko panah tu day

Mujhay hijr mein jo jala gaya
Kabhi mujh ko koi jaza tu day

Wu muhabbatun ki kahani’yan
Koi kash aaker suna tu day

Fara

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buhat achchay ... i like it
Wu muhabbatun ki kahani'yan
Koi kash aaker suna tu day
issi tarah likhti raheyaay ga...:)

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shukriya khan sahib…

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hummm achi koshish hay

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I respect your hmmm Azad Sahib, Shukriya janab-e-aali…:slight_smile:

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u r most wellcome

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:blush: thanx

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Azad to hum howay … yeh sahib or Janab kon hain :confused:

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hye hye hye, logon ko izzat raas nahi aati.. Sanoo Ki

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yeh howi na baat. ...

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get a life mate…:nono1:

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Jee acha

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kia fermaberdari hay, jeetay rahiyee munnay mian

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khoob:k:

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thanx…

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Its Beautiful.. Very Nice… :flower1:

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:flower1:Thanx GS :flower1:

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wah kya kehne… bouhat khoob… :k:

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shukriya janab… i am open to criticism…

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A big thumb for you for an excellent ghazal. I liked the theme and the words you have used. A very good attempt I must say :k: