meray ashaa'R haiN jitnay tumhaaRay naam kaRti hooN

Koyal · July 29, 2009, 3:41am

khizaa’oon ki udaasi hai
jo ab taak dil pe chaa’ee hai
bahaRooN ka hasee’N moasam
kahiN se saath laa’na tum
ye maa’na k tum ko bhi
jahaN maiN hain bohat say gham
magaR dunia k mailay maiN
hamaiN mut bhool jaa’Na tum
***meray ashaa’R haiN jitnay ***
tumhaaRay naam kaRti hooN
gazal meri suno jab bhi
lafzooN maiN doob jaNa tum
agaR kabhi tum se koi
meray baa’Ray maiN poochay tu
sirf itni khawaish hai
mujhay apna bataaNa tum
mujhay apNa bataaNa tum

Shab-e-Hijar · July 29, 2009, 4:59am

Nice1 :k:

poetry_lover · July 29, 2009, 5:34am

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waah

buhot khoob.....

terray_naam · July 29, 2009, 2:25pm

Re: meray ashaa'R haiN jitnay tumhaaRay naam kaRti hooN

bohat khoob jee

WiseGuy · July 29, 2009, 3:03pm

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bohat khoob

Aryaan · August 2, 2009, 12:39am

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Bohat Khoob Koyal..:k:

sannanahmad · August 3, 2009, 4:29am

Re: meray ashaa'R haiN jitnay tumhaaRay naam kaRti hooN

**meray ashaa'R haiN jitnay **
***tumhaaRay naam kaRti hooN

Thanks G

Buhat hi khoubsurat nazam aur nazmain mairi buhat bari kamzaori hain .. keep sharing

Starlight · August 3, 2009, 5:24pm

umda.

muddii · August 12, 2009, 4:14pm

Shukriya:)

P.S very nice choice:)

Koyal · August 18, 2009, 2:08pm

thanks muddi g :)

ehsan · August 18, 2009, 3:01pm

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Wah Wah, bauhat achhay.

system · August 19, 2009, 5:07am

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nice sharing

Koyal · August 24, 2009, 1:46pm

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^ thanks :)

nayab87 · August 24, 2009, 4:06pm

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very nice sharing.... Koyal gee

Precious_Khan · August 25, 2009, 9:49am

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Buhat Aala G :~)

Daanie · August 26, 2009, 1:46pm

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buhut khoob :)

Shazia_Arif · August 26, 2009, 2:57pm

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beautiful & touching.