meraa dil machal gayaa to meraa kia qusoor hai

salaam dosto,
hru?

ek adnaa sii koshish pesh-e-Khidmat hai gar giraaN_baar-e-tab’a na guzregaa…Kharaashii-e-samaa’at na ke liye peshgii ma’zarat pesh kartaa huN. :slight_smile:

**AUDIO LINK: **https://soundcloud.com/dam-dam-digaa…h-pe-aaj-nayaa

**aap ke hasin rukh pe aaj naya noor hai
mera dil machal gaya to mera kya qusur hai
aap ki nigaah ne kaha to kuchh zurur hai
mera dil machal gaya to mera kya qusur hai

khuli laton ki chhaanv men khila-khila sa roop hai
ghata pe jaise chha rahi subah-subah ki dhoop hai
jidhar nazar mudi udhar surur hi surur hai
mera dil…

jhuki-jhuki nigaah men bhi hain bala ki shokhiyaan
dabi-dabi hansi men bhi tadap rahi hain bijaliyaan
shabaab aap ka nashe men khud hi chur-chur hai
mera dil…

jahaan-jahaan pade qadam vahaan fizaan badal gai
ki jaise sar-basar bahaar aap hi men dhal gai
kisi men ye kashish kahaan jo aap men huzur hai
mera dil…**

regards
_______KKF

Re: meraa dil machal gayaa to meraa kia qusoor hai

Janab

Aapki peshe-khidmat humne ghuroor se mehsoos kee. Mehfile alam ki baat jo hai, humne isey waqai sunee aur mauje-shaamil ki andaaz lagai. Aapke peshadgi behtareen aur peshe-layak thi. Mashallaah aapke hoton se aise nagme barasthe rahe.

Re: meraa dil machal gayaa to meraa kia qusoor hai

One note:

Please repeat jidhar nazar mudi thrice. Yaani ke

Jidhar nazar mudi, jidhar nazar mudi
Jidhar nazar mudi, udhar suroor hi suroor hai

You only said it twice as opposed to thrice. Difference of night and day.

Ditto shabab aapka

And

Kisi mein yeh kashish.

Try it again. Listen to the song few times. Don't rush through it. And I promise you, you will kick ash.

Re: meraa dil machal gayaa to meraa kia qusoor hai

I listened to the rendition just now again. Your voice is good. It is sung well. Hope to hear 2nd version after that simple correction.

Re: meraa dil machal gayaa to meraa kia qusoor hai

Bohat Awla KKF... Ache voie Pai Ha Ap nay.. MashALLAH.... Shaabash. And ya adnaa si Kosish nhe ha... Mubarak bad vasol kijjyee

Re: meraa dil machal gayaa to meraa kia qusoor hai

hmmm, very interesting.

Re: meraa dil machal gayaa to meraa kia qusoor hai

imran khan, dairh saal tak, english mai bhi boltai rahain I won’t like him! :mad: