~* Mera Saath Koi Na De Saka, Meri Hasratein Hain Dhuan Dhuan *~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

system February 5, 2005, 2:55pm 1

***Yeh shab-e-firaaq, yeh bebasi, hain qadam qadam pe udaasiyan

Mera saath koi na de saka, meri hasratein hain dhuan dhuan

Main taRap taRap ke jiye to kya mere khwaab mujhse bichar gaye

Main udaas ghar ki sadaa sahi, mujhey de na koi tasalliyaan

Chali aisi dard ki aandhiyan, mere dil ki basti ujar gayi

Yeh jo raakh si hai bujhi bujhi, hain issi mein meri nishaaniyan

Yeh fiza jo gard-o-Gubaar hai, meri beqasi ka mazaar hai

Main woh phool hoon jo na khil saka, meri zindagi mein wafa kahan**

by Hassan Rizvi*

Shab-e-Hijar February 5, 2005, 6:48pm 2

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very nice :k:

Lamhay February 5, 2005, 7:18pm 3

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wah bahut khoob KN !

Describe Above Person In Three Words !!!

Golden_Scorpion_1 February 6, 2005, 7:20am 4

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Main woh phool hoon jo na khil saka, meri zindagi mein wafa kahan

Wah… Very Nice.. Sweety…

system February 7, 2005, 11:22am 5

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Thank you Shab-e-Hijar, Lamhay & GS bhai :-)

Koyal February 8, 2005, 12:40pm 6

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v nice KN thanks for sharin it again ..:)

system February 8, 2005, 2:43pm 7

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Thank You for liking and you’re most welcome

Amal February 8, 2005, 8:04pm 8

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didn’t read him a lot, but he certainly looks amazing. Achi selection hey KhamoshNigahein, thanx for sharing with us

GuL-e-Tasbeeh February 8, 2005, 10:45pm 9

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My fav one:-) khamoshnigahain whata lovely nick you have:-)

Aryaan February 9, 2005, 12:27am 10

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Bohat khoob KhamoshNigahein …:k:

system February 9, 2005, 9:04pm 11

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Amal: I haven't read that much of his work either, but what I read is truly amazing.. Thank you for liking :-)

Gul-e-Tasbeeh: Thank you for liking the poem and my nick... I like yours better :-)

Aryaan: Thank you so much for liking :-)

reet February 12, 2005, 11:10am 12

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bahot khoob ** KhamoshNigahein ** g....

Khambakat Nalayak

system February 12, 2005, 2:12pm 13

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Thanks reet :-)