mera naseeb tu nahiN , teri wafa to hai

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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bazm mein phir se haazir hua hooN apnii eik nayee ghazal ke saath. hamesha ki tarah aap saboN ki raaeye ka muntazir hooN…

mera naseeb tu nahiN , teri wafa to hai
na aye nazar na sahi,wajud e khuda to hai

saath chhoD chale sabhii hamsafar magar
teri yaad se mahaktii baad e saba to hai

ab hurf ke herpher ka main kya gilaa karooN
baawafa wo naa sahii, jaan e adaa to hai

ye ishq jab ho gaya ehsaas-e-gunaah tera
mere bhii dil ke bheetar, kuchh TuTta to hai

kya hua gar main na kabhee tera ban sakuN
mera dil tere dard se, magar aashnaa to hai

naadaN ho jo poochhate ho mera haasil-e-zist
naakaam hasratoN ka hii, eik silsila to hai

ab chaand ko eik TuTte taare se kya nisbat
maana ye haqeeqat hi sahii, dil dukha to hai

tamaam umar maiN jiska muntazir raha
aaj naashaad meri kabr pe, wo khaDa to hai

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Re: mera naseeb tu nahiN , teri wafa to hai

Bohat khoob Pra g thanks 4 sharing

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NICE :)

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Re: mera naseeb tu nahiN , teri wafa to hai

veryyyyyyy nice :k:

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Re: mera naseeb tu nahiN , teri wafa to hai

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *

kya hua gar main na kabhee tera ban sakuN
mera dil tere dard se, magar aashnaa to hai

naadaN ho jo poochhate ho mera haasil-e-zist
naakaam hasratoN ka hii, eik silsila to hai

ab chaand ko eik TuTte taare se kya nisbat
maana ye haqeeqat hi sahii, dil dukha to hai

tamaam umar maiN jiska muntazir raha
aaj naashaad meri kabr pe, wo khaDa to hai
[/QUOTE]

Very Nice Pramod Ji, Thanks for sharing :)

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bhut khoob :k:
aur bhut hi khoobsourt khayaal :slight_smile:
thxs 4 sharing :slight_smile:

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Re: mera naseeb tu nahiN , teri wafa to hai

very well done Pramod:k:…bohat khoob:)

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ghazal pasand karne aur meri honsla afzaai ke liye Nikami bahna,amal jii, chanad chehra jii,nikii jii,GuL-e-Tasbeeh jii aap sabhee ka bahot bahot shukriya.

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Re: mera naseeb tu nahiN , teri wafa to hai

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *

naadaN ho jo poochhate ho mera haasil-e-zist
naakaam hasratoN ka hii, eik silsila to hai

tamaam umar maiN jiska muntazir raha
aaj naashaad meri kabr pe, wo khaDa to hai
[/QUOTE]

buhat khoob Pramod jee...

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honsla afzaai ke liye shukriya, Rameesha jii.

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uff thats powerful stuff.
made me have tears
:'(

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Mem Sahib: *
uff thats powerful stuff.
made me have tears
:'(
[/QUOTE]

Mem Sahib, aap ko rulaane ke liye dukh hai mujhe.
lekin hansla afzaai ke liye aap ka bahot bahot shukriya.

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Hmmm Very Nice…:k:

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kia kehna pramod ji

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boht achei :)

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honsla afzaai le liye bahot bahot shukriya, nayab ,Masoom Muskaan and Lamhey.

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Re: mera naseeb tu nahiN , teri wafa to hai

bhut khoob:k:

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Buhat Khoob :k:

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Re: mera naseeb tu nahiN , teri wafa to hai

wow this i call a poetry :k:

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ghazal pasand karne ke liye bahot bahot shukriya Jaan Lewa, Sunny Boy and Janu Jia.