Mera naam tak jo na ley saka

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Re: Mera naam tak jo na ley saka

@Khalil KhaaN FaaKhta

nice but once again the ash’aars are broken up for whatever reason…it’s more like a qit’a OR two ash’aar at best. better be written like this:

Mera naam tak jo na ley saka, Jo mujhe Qarar na dey saka
Jisey ikhtiyaar to tha magar Mujhe apna pyaar na dey saka

Wohii shakhs merii talash hy, Wohii dard merii hayat hy…
Jo Chala gaya mujhe chhor kar Wohii aaj tak mere pass hy..

KKF aap ye try karen