Mera naam tak jo na ley saka

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

devilish_angel June 5, 2012, 8:08pm 1

Mera naam tak jo na ley saka
Jo mujhe Qarar na dey saka

Jisey ikhtiyaar to tha magar
Mujhe apna pyaar na dey saka

Wohii shakhs merii talash hy
Wohii dard merii hayat hy…

Jo Chala gaya mujhe chhor kar
Wohii aaj tak mere pass hy..

KKF June 5, 2012, 8:12pm 2

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nice but once again the ash'aars are broken up for whatever reason...it's more like a qit'a OR two ash'aar at best. better be written like this:

Mera naam tak jo na ley saka, Jo mujhe Qarar na dey saka
Jisey ikhtiyaar to tha magar Mujhe apna pyaar na dey saka

Wohii shakhs merii talash hy, Wohii dard merii hayat hy…
Jo Chala gaya mujhe chhor kar Wohii aaj tak mere pass hy..

devilish_angel June 5, 2012, 8:17pm 3

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itni akal kahn mujhe mei

muqawwee123 June 5, 2012, 8:20pm 4

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KKF aap ye try karen

KKF June 5, 2012, 8:20pm 5

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'aql to uskii nahiiN thii jis ne originally post kiyaa thaa…is meN u kaa koii dosh nahiiN…ab, sad to na hoN Khair se! chaliye, muskuraaiye!

devilish_angel June 5, 2012, 8:22pm 6

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ab thek hai

KKF June 5, 2012, 8:22pm 7

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waah bahot Khoob…thank you, Muqwee Bhai! btw, kiskaa kalaam hai?

KKF June 5, 2012, 8:23pm 8

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good girl!

devilish_angel June 5, 2012, 8:25pm 9

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enter10 June 5, 2012, 8:53pm 10

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Bohat Khoob…:k:

devilish_angel June 5, 2012, 9:00pm 11

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shukriya :)

muqawwee123 June 6, 2012, 8:53am 12

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KKF, the poet is Khwaja Pervez. Famous Pakistani musician and lyricist. He wrote many songs for Nusrat Fateh Ali Khan including the famous ‘kisse da yaar na BichhRay’.

Music legend Khawaja Pervez dies | The Nation

Decent_6Chora June 6, 2012, 12:13pm 13

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KKF k samney koi sucide ker raha hoo ga tu KKF will say

"eik minute eik minute, yee phanda galey main theek sai nahi hai … its more on the right then left. eeeeey..there u go. now its fine. Help your self :k: "

devilish_angel June 6, 2012, 12:15pm 14

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muqawwee123 June 6, 2012, 5:37pm 15

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KKF ye main kia sun raha hoon

KKF June 6, 2012, 5:39pm 16

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na suno gar kahe koii
na kaho gar sune koi! :)