Meray puray sawalon ko
Adhooray jawab
Meri poori yadoon ko
Adhooray aks
Meri poori neendoon ko
Adhooray khawab
Meri poori sansoon ko
Adhoori dharkanaein
Meri poori soochoon ko
Adhoori tasaliyan
Mari be ta bi e deed ko
Mahroomain deedar
Denay ke baad
Uss ne kaha
“Ke jee sakoo gay istaraha?”
Aab tak tu jee liya
Magar dar hai
Jis din ya adhoora pan
Mukamal howa to khein
Sans hi na … !
Dilsay
Ji DILSAY !!!!
aap ki yeh nazam maeree tarha, AADHOORI, kuyn hai????
waesae tu adhoorapan koi khushgawar amer nahin, magar,
maeree adhoori baatoon ko
mukamal beqararee......
maeree adhoori sochoon ko
mukamal bechaenee.......
maeree adhoori ratoon ko
mukamal beqali.......
main rehnae ki kuch aesee adat see ho gaee hai ,
kae maerae adhooraepan ko takmeel ki justejo bhi nahin.........
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*Originally posted by aadhoorighazal: *
Ji DILSAY !!!!
aap ki yeh nazam maeree tarha, AADHOORI, kuyn hai????
waesae tu adhoorapan koi khushgawar amer nahin, magar,
maeree adhoori baatoon ko
mukamal beqararee......
maeree adhoori sochoon ko
mukamal bechaenee.......
maeree adhoori ratoon ko
mukamal beqali.......
main rehnae ki kuch aesee adat see ho gaee hai ,
kae maerae adhooraepan ko takmeel ki justejo bhi nahin.........
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Bass adhoora sa mahsoos hoo raha tha is liya ya behi adhoori hai... magar ya behi acha hai jo aap nay likha... aap kay pass who sub kuch mukamal hai jo hamaray pass adhoora hai... jahan tak baat hai justejo ke... wo tu rahtee hai... na chahtay howay behi... dekho na aap nay
ya sub kuch mukamal rakha hai....
mukamal beqararee......
maeree adhoori sochoon ko
mukamal bechaenee.......
maeree adhoori ratoon ko
mukamal beqali.......
Is ko mukamal rakhana behi tu ak justejo hai na.... theek ya galat... ?
Dilsay very nice:k::k:and complete it.
aahdorae kise chess ko nahi chortae
Yeh kia kar sakta hay … jo karna hay 10 numberi nay karna hay. 