Mera Khaamosh reh ker bhi unhaiN sub kuch suna dena

WiseGuy · July 8, 2003, 12:33pm

Mera Khaamosh reh ker bhi unhaiN sub kuch suna dena ZabaaN say kuch na kehna dekh ker aaNsoo baha dena

Nasheman ho na ho yeh tu falak ka mashGHala Thehra
Keh do tinke jahaaN par dekhna bijlee gira dena

Ijaazat ho tu keh dooN qissa-e-ulfat sar-e-mehfil
Mujhe kuch to fasana yaad hai kuch tum suna dena

MaiN mujrim hooN mujhay iqaraar hai jurm-e-muhabbat ka
Magar pehlay Khata par GHaur ker lo phir saza dena

MaiN is haalat maiN ponhNcha hashr walay Khud pukar uThay
Koi fariyad karanay a raha hai raasta dena

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 8, 2003, 12:55pm

Re: Mera Khaamosh reh ker bhi unhaiN sub kuch suna dena

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*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Ijaazat ho tu keh dooN qissa-e-ulfat sar-e-mehfil
Mujhe kuch to fasana yaad hai kuch tum suna dena

MaiN mujrim hooN mujhay iqaraar hai jurm-e-muhabbat ka
Magar pehlay Khata par GHaur ker lo phir saza dena

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Welcome back:-)

Beautiful ghazal, Thanks for sharing WG.

WiseGuy · July 8, 2003, 12:59pm

Re: Re: Mera Khaamosh reh ker bhi unhaiN sub kuch suna dena

Awwwww…
Thank you very much… You remembered…

And thanks for liking my post…

BoReD_iN_BrIsBaNe · July 8, 2003, 1:17pm

nice :k:

system · July 8, 2003, 1:57pm

:k:

ASA · July 8, 2003, 3:31pm

Re: Mera Khaamosh reh ker bhi unhaiN sub kuch suna dena

** Ijaazat ho tu keh dooN qissa-e-ulfat sar-e-mehfil Mujhe kuch to fasana yaad hai kuch tum suna dena **

bouhat khoob… :k:

WiseGuy · July 8, 2003, 4:11pm

Thanks All :)

Koyal · July 8, 2003, 4:48pm

hmmmm :k:

system · July 8, 2003, 5:20pm

good1 :k::k:

Swera · July 9, 2003, 3:16am

Re: Mera Khaamosh reh ker bhi unhaiN sub kuch suna dena

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*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Mera Khaamosh reh ker bhi unhaiN sub kuch suna dena
ZabaaN say kuch na kehna dekh ker aaNsoo baha dena

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Wah!

Bohat khoob...Quit touchy!

Dekh kay ansoo baha dena.Wah...
Ap rotain bhi hain? :p

Kafi rooz kay baad dekhai diya ap.:D

WiseGuy · July 9, 2003, 3:23am

Thanks Koyal, Vivacious, and Swera...
Swera jee bas kabhi kabhi dil kerta ronay ko, aur I was little busy.. isi liay nahee aa raha tha, thanks for the concern.. :)

Swera · July 9, 2003, 3:26am

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*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *
Thanks Koyal, Vivacious, and Swera...
Swera jee bas kabhi kabhi dil kerta ronay ko, aur I was little busy.. isi liay nahee aa raha tha, thanks for the concern.. :)
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U r welcome.