mera ek she'r az tazmeen bar Ghazal-e-vaalid marHoom

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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rahaa mere KhayaaloN meN jo har_dam roo_ba_roo barsoN
vohii aataa rahaa KhaaboN meN mere hoo_ba_hoo barsoN

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Re: mera ek she’r az tazmeen bar Ghazal-e-vaalid marHoom

soo nyc :k:

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Re: mera ek she'r az tazmeen bar Ghazal-e-vaalid marHoom

کیا کہنے جناب ،۔۔۔۔ بہت عمدہ

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Re: mera ek she'r az tazmeen bar Ghazal-e-vaalid marHoom

Nice, very touching.

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Re: mera ek she’r az tazmeen bar Ghazal-e-vaalid marHoom

thank you.

shukria, janaab!

thank you so much. actually, this is a very popular zameen among certain group of sho’araa. i know at least 5 Ghazals. mine is just a childish effort.

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You should write regularly as this is a very good effort.

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jii, maiN to aksar likhtaa hii rahtaa huN...magar kia likhtaa huN yeh to bas maiN jaanuuN yaa meraa Khudaa jaane. hehe

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good one. :k:

arz kiya hai

mere dil maiN hi reh kar mujh se hi parda kiya uss ne
bhataktay hum rahe thay jis ki khatir koo ba koo barsoN

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Re: mera ek she’r az tazmeen bar Ghazal-e-vaalid marHoom

:lajawab:

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