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Bohat khoob...
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*Originally posted by Swera: *
Bohat khoob...
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thanks swera
shahzad
very nice
zabardus:k:
thanks for your kind words
shahzad
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*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *
very nice
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thankyou for your comments
shahzad
:k:
Main Uss ko chahta hoon
Wah
:k:
aho nice ji :k:
thanks for your words
shahzad
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Originally posted by Azad: *
**Main Uss ko chahta hoon*
Wah
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thanks for your comments
thanks for your comments
shahzad
thanks for your words
shahzad
thankls to all fellows for their kind words
shahzad
thanks for your praise
shahzad
thanks again for your praise
shahzaf
good idea but you need a lot of maturity and correction as urdu poetry needs delicate balance & comprihensiveness............ghazal ke misron main ek bahmi wazan zarori hai jo abhi aap creat nahi ker paey..........overall it is a good effort ........shabash
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*Originally posted by sorajson: *
good idea but you need a lot of maturity and correction as urdu poetry needs delicate balance & comprihensiveness............ghazal ke misron main ek bahmi wazan zarori hai jo abhi aap creat nahi ker paey..........overall it is a good effort ........shabash
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thanks for remarks.I will try to come in beher Inshallah
shahzad