Re: Re: meiN thehar thehar k har qadam pe dekhti hooN baar-ha
thanks so much WG ap ne waqie he bohat khubsurat bana dala per agar back ground kuch thora light hota tu hamari gazal ko mazeed char chand lagnay thay .. bohat bohat thanks
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*Originally posted by SuraJ: *
meiN dil ko apney maar kar khush thi ke qissa khatm huwa
par khaahishoN ke mazaar pe koi phir sey deeye jalaa gaya
bahut kamaal ki likhi hai jee bahut Umda !!
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Re: Re: Re: meiN thehar thehar k har qadam pe dekhti hooN baar-ha
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*Originally posted by Koyal: *
thanks so much WG ap ne waqie he bohat khubsurat bana dala per agar back ground kuch thora light hota tu hamari gazal ko mazeed char chand lagnay thay .. bohat bohat thanks
You are welcome.
Woh kafi ujlat main kia tha na, aur isi liay post bhi nahee kia tha, keh check it and then post it. Chalain ab isi per guzara kijeay. Next time kay liay aapkay mizaaj ka pata chal gaya.
Re: meiN thehar thehar k har qadam pe dekhti hooN baar-ha
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*Originally posted by Koyal: *
ET se aik request agar wo ye gazal parehin tu pplzz kisi bohat khubsurat img main isay laga dain....thanks in Advance..:)..koi khushbo jesa img..:)
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laaya hai ab k bahaar jo usey dhoondti hai meri nazaR
jo meri kitaaboN meiN jaga jaga taazey gulab chupa gaya
meiN thehar thehar k har qadam pe dekhti hooN baar-ha
koi aasmaan sey torr kar meri rahoN meiN tarey bicha gaya
khaab ban kar mila bhi to meri neend ka rakkha khayal yuN
k khamshi ki zubaan meiN mujhey dil ki bateiN bataa gaya
merey zehan ke qufal khol kar wo roshni ke saath saath
merey dil ki dar-o-dewaar par apni tasveereiN sajaa gaya
meiN hawaa ke dosh pe us ke sang urrti hooN kehkashaoN meiN
jo ik band gali sey nikaal kar mujhey zindagi sey milaa gaya
meiN dil ko apney maar kar khush thi ke qissa khatm huwa
par khaahishoN ke mazaar pe koi phir sey deeye jalaa gaya*
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Oh my God....yeh to buhat hee piyaree ghazal hai..buhat achee lagee, thanks for sharing..kis kee likhee hai?
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*Originally posted by SuraJ: *
meiN dil ko apney maar kar khush thi ke qissa khatm huwa
par khaahishoN ke mazaar pe koi phir sey deeye jalaa gaya
bahut kamaal ki likhi hai jee bahut Umda !!
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