MeiN sohni thee

Kahaani aaj muddat ba’d meri unGliyoN ki narm poroN par
ruki aur mujh se poocha
sakhhi tuj se jo thora waqt maaguN tou mujhe dey gee?
kaha, meiN ne, saheli! kher se ayee ho tum
tou waqt kya ye zindagi ley lo

kahani dheere dheere, soch ke kuch chor rastoN se
lahu main is tara utri, mein apne hosh khho bethi
kahani youN huee goya
agar kacha ghaRa ho tou kinaara mil nahi sakta
sakhhi, tou sohni hai sohni ko duub jana hai

phir us ne kuch tu’aquf se kaha mujh se
mohabbat dou jaziiroN par khaRi heraan khushbu hai
vo kushbu jis ko ik dooje ko chuune ki ijaazat mil nahi sakti
sakhhi, tou aaGahii waali hai, jazboN ki tou qaidii ban gayee kese?

Kaha meiN ne, saheli, laakhh chaaha mein ne bach jaaon
mohabbat aik daldal ki tara, chaaroN taraf mujh ko dikhaii dii
vo daldal phelti he jaa rehi thii meri har jaanib
yahaN tak ke meri aaNkheN bhee us ne cheen liN mujh se
zara socho, agar maiN bach jaati tou kahaN jaati
qadam meiN ne uthaya aur muR ka phir nahiN dekha
mohabbat meiN ne kab ki ye tou sarzad ho gayee mujh se
musallat ki gayee mujh par

kahaani sun ke saari daastaaN boli, chalo choRo
muqqaddar ki naffi karna kahaN asaan hota hai
sakhhi, tou sohni thii, sohni ko duub jana tha
aGar kacha ghaRa ho tou kinaara mil nahi sakta

Re: MeiN sohni thee

Awesome :k:

hmmm. very nice nazish ji :flower1:

sakhhi, tou sohni thii, sohni ko duub jana tha
aGar kacha ghaRa ho tou kinaara mil nahi sakta

bohat khoob nazo :teary3:

very nice :k:

it's true but soo sooo sad :(((

zabardast:k:

ncie:)

beautiful:k:

Thanks :-)

thora story type lagta haye,
wording achi haye, very nice indeed. :)

shukriya hanie ji.

ye nazm ki shakal main kahani hai :-)