Mein ne koi bhooj nahi Janat ko uthaya hy Ma!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

lethal_kamikaze December 17, 2012, 3:40pm 1

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Mein ne koi bhooj nahi Janat ko uthaya hy Ma!
Mein tera haq phir bhi ada na kr paya Ma!

Tere khaloos ki chadar tani rahi sar pr
Yehi sa’adat hy k rahy tere saya Ma!

to ne zindagi bhar seenay se lagay rakha
Mein tere qadmoon mein bhi sar na rakh paya Ma!

Tere lafzoon ki chashmni hy ke kaan ab talak
Suntain hain wohi loori jo bachpan mein sunaya Ma!

Teri dua’aon ke sadqay balain jaati rahin
Is abd ne kar bar you hi azmaaya Ma!

Mein ne koi bhooj nahi Janat ko uthaya hy Ma!

TlGER December 17, 2012, 3:44pm 2

Re: Mein ne koi bhooj nahi Janat ko uthaya hy Ma!

Very nice :k:

punjabi_kuri_1 December 17, 2012, 4:04pm 3

Re: Mein ne koi bhooj nahi Janat ko uthaya hy Ma!

Awesomely beautiful

in poetry LKK naqli but awesome champ

lethal_kamikaze December 17, 2012, 5:27pm 4

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^
What do u mean by ‘nagli’

punjabi_kuri_1 December 17, 2012, 6:13pm 5

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NaGli nahi NAQLI (fake)

muqawwee123 December 17, 2012, 6:14pm 6

Re: Mein ne koi bhooj nahi Janat ko uthaya hy Ma!

nice..

aap se mil ke hum kuch badal se gaye
shair paRhne lage gungunane lage

to bhabi for bringing this change to LKK

muqawwee123 December 17, 2012, 6:14pm 7

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naqli JP

punjabi_kuri_1 December 17, 2012, 6:20pm 8

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yes naqli JP…hahahmeans naqli ja’ali punjabihahaham asli

muqawwee123 December 17, 2012, 6:21pm 9

Re: Mein ne koi bhooj nahi Janat ko uthaya hy Ma!

nahin naqli bhi aur jaali bhi

punjabi_kuri_1 December 17, 2012, 6:32pm 10

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nahi Asli :D