meiN ne bhi ek chiraagh sa dil saR-e-shaam rakh diya

NikamiJano · September 24, 2002, 10:29pm

usne sakoot-e-shab meiN bhi apna payaam rakh diya
hijaR ki raat baam paR maah-e-tamaam rakh diya

aa’mad-e-dost ki naveed kuu-e-wafa meiN aam thi
meiN ne bhi ek chiraagh sa dil saR-e-shaam rakh diya

dekho ye mere khwaab thay dekho ye mere zakhm haiN
meiN ne to sab hisaab-e-jaan bar saR-e-aam rakh diya

usne nazaR nazaR meiN he aise bhale sukhan kahay
meiN ne to uske paa’OoN meiN saaraa kalaam rakh diya

shiddat-e-tishnagi meiN bhi ghairat-e-maikashi rahi
usne jo phair li nazaR meiN ne bhi jaam rakh diya

Sohaib · September 25, 2002, 12:45am

excellent post :k:

Amal · September 25, 2002, 2:01am

Re: meiN ne bhi ek chiraagh sa dil saR-e-shaam rakh diya

Amazing

… thanx for this beautiful ghazal NikamiJi

SunnyBoy · September 25, 2002, 5:01am

Zabar10 :k:

Pramod · September 25, 2002, 5:27am

dekho ye mere khwaab thay dekho ye mere zakhm haiN
meiN ne to sab hisaab-e-jaan bar saR-e-aam rakh diya

usne nazaR nazaR meiN he aise bhale sukhan kahay
meiN ne to uske paa'OoN meiN saaraa kalaam rakh diya

shiddat-e-tishnagi meiN bhi ghairat-e-maikashi rahi
usne jo phair li nazaR meiN ne bhi jaam rakh diya

bahot hi pyaara hai, bahna. your choice is really great.
Thanks for sharing it here.

Azam_1 · September 25, 2002, 6:15am

Re: meiN ne bhi ek chiraagh sa dil saR-e-shaam rakh diya

zabardasttttttttt :k:

nikami aab apna custom title change karwa lo .. kiyon ke aab tum sudharti jaa rahi hoo

_Masoom_Muskaan · September 25, 2002, 7:53am

boht achei nikami sister :)

Lamhay · September 25, 2002, 8:36am

gr8 choice nikami siso

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · September 25, 2002, 11:48am

Re: meiN ne bhi ek chiraagh sa dil saR-e-shaam rakh diya

superb:k:
NJ sis Beautiful Poetry Thanks for sharing

NikamiJano · September 25, 2002, 6:32pm

thanks saby..Amal ......SB....MM..... lamhay sis.....and gul-e-Tea....:)

NikamiJano · September 25, 2002, 6:33pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *

bahot hi pyaara hai, bahna. your choice is really great.
Thanks for sharing it here.
[/QUOTE]

thanks Pra g......:)......keep smiling....:)

NikamiJano · September 25, 2002, 6:35pm

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thanks Azam Sahib and wb again ahhhh ap phir se a gaye…keon keon hamarey icon ko kia huwa keon change kar lain…itna paya tu hia dekhiey tu gulab mu main lay k sab kush amdeed…

wesay me kabhi sudhery ghi nehi ye bata dain ap ko…

nikii · September 25, 2002, 7:43pm

bhut khooob :k:

chand_chehra · September 26, 2002, 2:50am

veryyyyy nice jano gi :k:

Azam_1 · September 26, 2002, 6:55am

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welcome karney ka bohot bohot shukriya :~) Allah tumko iska ajar de .. Ameen :~)

or madam main tumharey icon ki nahi .. title ki baat kar raha tha :~)

“Nikami jo kabhi nahi sudhray gi .. is leay kabhi alwida na kehna”

so I was asking you to change this title to “Nikami jo Azam ke aaney se sudhar gai he .. aab alwida keh ke to dekho ”

yeah tum par suit karey ga

or rahi baat tumharey icon ki tu its perfect :k:

sada khush rahoo :~)

Capricorn · September 26, 2002, 4:48pm

Its beautiful Nik :k:

NikamiJano · September 26, 2002, 5:45pm

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k k k k k k k k kiaaaaaaaaaaaaa Azam k anay per sudheri ya aur bighri:hoonh:

nahi na he alwida kahnaaur na he sudhri wesay ye mu aur masoor ki daal:hoonh:

NikamiJano · September 26, 2002, 5:46pm

niki ....chando and capo.........thanks

_Passionate · September 26, 2002, 5:52pm

zabardast nikamijano, just wonderful.

did u write ir or is it somebody else’s?

NikamiJano · September 27, 2002, 1:53am

thanks Passion..i wish k hum ne likhi hoti…ye Faraz ki hia…