mein ne baarha puucha apni tanhayee se

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mein ne baarha puucha apni tanhayee se
dill mein uthti huwi benaam si duhayee se

iss lazaawaal saath ka sabab kia hai
chashm ke namm honey ka sabab kya hai

zaat apni pasti mein khray menaar si kiun hai
rooh hamari andr se beqaraar si kiun hai

roz o shab janoon ka ye aalam kiun
pas-e-parda bujhi hasraton ka maatam kiun

ihbaab o dunya se is qadar doori hai kiss liye
darmyan mein ikk farq rakhna zaroori hai kiss liye

taa-hadd-e nazar aik hi hasti hai kiun
DAATA ik hi batii hui yeh basti hai kiun

dill is qadar be-Tawazan kiun hai
kabhi muhabat kabhi nafrat kiun hai

sadaa se maazi mera dushman kiun hai
dill mein Iqbal, tere yeh jalan si Kiun hai

ACHI BURI QABOOL KAR LEIN GAY..NAAA AAAP

Re: mein ne baarha puucha apni tanhayee se

Na'pasand karne ka to sawaal hi nahi utthta.
Aap ki nazm bohat pasand aai mujhey, khaas
tor pe wo sheir jo 'bold' kia hey meiN ney.

Kuch log qalam sey likhey heiN aur kuch dil sey.
Aap ka ta'aalluq doosri qism ke logoN sey hey.
Ye nazm hamaarey saath share karne ke leeye
be'had shukriya. Umeed hey ye silsila jaari rahey ga :)

Re: mein ne baarha puucha apni tanhayee se

uncle ap ko kisi se impress hone ki kya zarurat,ap tu mashallah khudi bohat acha likh lete hain :)

Re: mein ne baarha puucha apni tanhayee se

zabardast :lajawab:

boht umdah ghazal hai janab :k:

Re: mein ne baarha puucha apni tanhayee se

nice :crying: