MeiN kis se kis se ye ja ke poochooN...

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Aek puraani ghazal, aap logoN ki nazar :~)

MeiN kis se kis se ye ja ke poochooN ke naveed-e-khusbu kidhar gai
Ye ab ke khizaaN ko kya huwa kiuN meri nighaah meiN thehar gai!

meiN kya bataaoN ke ab ki baar chaman ki haalat ajeeb thi
har phool maatam-sara mila meri jahaN jahaN bhi nazar gai

abhi hey zara wo asar jisey meri zaat ney pooja kabhi magar
wo januN to kab ka khatam huwa, wo soorat to dil sey utar gai

mujhey kis jurm ki saza mili ke meri rooh tak hey thaki hui
meiN apni jaga sey hilaa nahi meri saaNs phir bhi ukharr gai

ye chiraagh-e-jaaN bhi ajeeb hey ke jala huwa hey abhi talak
teri bewafaai ki aaNdhiyaaN to kabhi ki aa ke guzar gaeeN

merey aasmaaN ke haath meiN bas aek chaand tha aas ka
usey baadloN ney nigal liya to meri kaaeynaat hi ujarr gai

By: Amal

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Re: MeiN kis se kis se ye ja ke poochooN...

I've read this before...beutifulllll thanks for sharing with us again :-)

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mujhe kis jurm ki saza mili...i think kisi ka signature perha tha ajj poori ghazal bhi mil hi gayee:)

zabardestttt!!!
thx 4 sharing:)

only married 2 months and feel depressed
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Re: MeiN kis se kis se ye ja ke poochooN...

jitni baaR paRho utni baaR :)

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Re: MeiN kis se kis se ye ja ke poochooN...

Beautiful! thanks for sharing :)

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Re: MeiN kis se kis se ye ja ke poochooN...

v nice:)

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Re: MeiN kis se kis se ye ja ke poochooN...

Amazing stuff, jitni baar bhi parho :-) pehley sher ki pehley waali pehli line zeyada achi thii:~)

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Re: MeiN kis se kis se ye ja ke poochooN...

Very nice..............)

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Re: MeiN kis se kis se ye ja ke poochooN…

I didn’t know THAT SHER is yours!! LOVED THE FULL GHAZAL! Absolutely amazing. Thank you for sharing. :flower1:

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Re: MeiN kis se kis se ye ja ke poochooN...

nice one

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**
[QUOTE]
merey aasmaaN ke haath meiN bas aek chaand tha aas ka
usey baadloN ney nigal liya to meri kaaeynaat hi ujarr gai
[/QUOTE]
**

sigh

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Re: MeiN kis se kis se ye ja ke poochooN...

Thanx for liking it guys :)

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Re: MeiN kis se kis se ye ja ke poochooN...

Amal always love to read these gazal again an again :)

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Re: MeiN kis se kis se ye ja ke poochooN...

My pleasure Koyal :)

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Re: MeiN kis se kis se ye ja ke poochooN...

AMAL....is dat classical n excellent nazam is ur own?

if yes den really well done.

Happy birthday to me
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Re: MeiN kis se kis se ye ja ke poochooN...

Ji ye meri apni ghazal hey. Thanx for liking it fizkhan :)

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Oh my God! Amal. Beautiful man. Just got stuck in this line.

"mujhey kis jurm ki saza mili ke meri rooh tak hey thaki hui"

really impressive. wo kia hey key "Dil aaj udaas hey" and I knew that I would only find the peace in your poetry.

Thanks for making my day!
chodhry

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Re: MeiN kis se kis se ye ja ke poochooN…

Its brilliant, buhat khoob

thanks for sharing with us …:slight_smile:

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Amal good work done. take this
Elahi kis terah main sabr ker jaoon judai per
Tassali us ko deta hoon nikaltay hain meray ansoo.

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Re: MeiN kis se kis se ye ja ke poochooN...

its beautiful; superb