~Mein Apne Gaon Ke kache Makaan Se Bhi Gaya~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

decent_Felow August 31, 2007, 9:14pm 1

Zamin Pe Chal Na Sakaa Asmaan Se Bhi Gaya
Kata Ke Par Ko Parinda Uraan Se Bhi Gaya

Tabah Kar Gai Pake Makaan Ki Khuwahish
Mein Apne Gaon Ke kache Makaan Se Bhi Gaya

Parai Aag Mein Khud Ko Jala Ke kiya Mila Tujh Ko
Use Bacha Na Saka Apni Jaan Se Bhi Gaya

Bhulana Chaha To Bhulane Ki inteha Kar Di
Wo Shakhs Ab Mere Vihm o Guman Se Bhi Gaya

Kisi Ke Hath Ka Nikla Huwa Wo Teer Hoon Mein
Hadaf Ko chu Na Saka Aur kamaan Se Bhi Gaya

Shab-e-Hijar September 1, 2007, 1:46am 2

Re: ~Mein Apne Gaon Ke kache Makaan Se Bhi Gaya~

nice :k:

Dushwari September 1, 2007, 2:02am 3

Re: ~Mein Apne Gaon Ke kache Makaan Se Bhi Gaya~

nice selection DF.
but the protagonist is very hopeless. he/she must find a way to save both own self and the one who is to be saved.
difficult, but not impossible.

Dushwari

decent_Felow September 1, 2007, 2:05am 4

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thts mission impossible ...its the sam as u just need 30 RUNS IN 1 over ...u can do it ...but demanding job ... :p

tum_bin_1 September 1, 2007, 7:29am 5

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**Wahhhhhhhhh **

**Bohat he khubsurat ghazal hai **

**har shair he amaizing hai **

Great sharing :k:

decent_Felow September 2, 2007, 2:36am 6

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thank u soo much every1 :)

Shumaisa September 2, 2007, 6:56am 7

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Nice.. :k:

Prince_Ali September 2, 2007, 12:15pm 8

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very nice :k:

Jhanjharewali September 3, 2007, 12:05pm 9

Re: ~Mein Apne Gaon Ke kache Makaan Se Bhi Gaya~

its really really 'lobly" :D
really!!

My problem is..

ashi2007 September 3, 2007, 1:40pm 10

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very nice
n try try again

decent_Felow September 9, 2007, 8:23pm 11

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thank u soo much every1 :)

Dilsay September 10, 2007, 1:28am 12

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Kiya baat hai.. Achi hai aap ke pasand.. Khush rahoo

Koyal September 10, 2007, 2:38am 13

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nice one :)

decent_Felow September 14, 2007, 5:56pm 14

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thank u soo much e

redidentity September 15, 2007, 4:40am 15

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Beautiful :)

taliba2007 September 17, 2007, 1:29pm 16

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Nice one.

decent_Felow September 17, 2007, 6:22pm 17

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thanks

EEMAAN September 17, 2007, 6:34pm 18

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Very nice..

decent_Felow September 20, 2007, 12:29am 19

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thank u soo much :)