Mein Akser Tum Ko Khuwabo mein, Batana Bhool Jata Ho

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal September 16, 2007, 4:58pm 1

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tumhara naam likh likh ker mitana bhool Jata Hoon
tumhe Jab yaad karta hooN bhulana bhool Jata Ho

buhat si aisi baatin hein jo mere dil mein rehti hain
mager jab tum te milta hooN sunana bhool jata hooN

]tumhare baad ab her pal bari mushkil se kat ta Hey
meiN akser Tum Ko khuwabo meiN batana bhool jata hooN

meiN Her Shaam Kehta Ho, Tum Ko Bhool Jaoga
mager Jab subha hoti hai irada bhool Jata hooN

SJ September 16, 2007, 5:07pm 2

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amazing koyal:hugz:
bohat pyaree ghazal hai:)

Prince_Ali September 16, 2007, 5:07pm 3

Re: Mein Akser Tum Ko Khuwabo mein, Batana Bhool Jata Ho

tumhara naam likh likh ker mitana bhool Jata Hoon
tumhe Jab yaad karta hooN bhulana bhool Jata Ho

wah!

Sheal September 16, 2007, 5:10pm 4

Re: Mein Akser Tum Ko Khuwabo mein, Batana Bhool Jata Ho

bohot khoob :k:

deep_ocean September 16, 2007, 5:55pm 5

Re: Mein Akser Tum Ko Khuwabo mein, Batana Bhool Jata Ho

Buhat khoob Koyal :)

Shab-e-Hijar September 16, 2007, 6:23pm 6

Re: Mein Akser Tum Ko Khuwabo mein, Batana Bhool Jata Ho

Niceee :D

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GuL-e-Tasbeeh September 16, 2007, 7:36pm 7

Re: Mein Akser Tum Ko Khuwabo mein, Batana Bhool Jata Ho

Phool ka Rang buhat acha hey lekin sabs patoN k saath match nahi ho raha:~)
poem bhi buhat achi post ki hey Koyal ji:-)

Muslim_girl_1 September 16, 2007, 8:57pm 8

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beautiful:k:

SunnyBoy September 16, 2007, 9:37pm 9

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nice :k:

Koyal September 17, 2007, 2:39am 10

Re: Mein Akser Tum Ko Khuwabo mein, Batana Bhool Jata Ho

gul abhi taak blue pataye dekhaiey nahi dea'ey waran wo jor daiti :p

ab ap ki tabieat kesi hia :)

Dushwari September 17, 2007, 4:16am 11

Re: Mein Akser Tum Ko Khuwabo mein, Batana Bhool Jata Ho

Koyal, nice poem.
good thoughts..sincere maybe.
Dushwari

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redidentity September 17, 2007, 4:23am 12

Re: Mein Akser Tum Ko Khuwabo mein, Batana Bhool Jata Ho

Awesome :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh September 17, 2007, 8:44am 13

Re: Mein Akser Tum Ko Khuwabo mein, Batana Bhool Jata Ho

Wuhi tou kah rahii hooN phool ka rang acha hey lekin match nahi karta kya Haqeeqat meiN aap ney kabhi aesa sky blue Rose dekha hey? :-)

meri tabiyat achi hey issliye tou aap ko online nazar aa rahi hooN :-(

Koyal September 17, 2007, 10:30am 14

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G keon nahi dekha haqeeqat main b aisa phool dekha hia :)

sunny_nicky September 17, 2007, 11:24am 15

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niceee

Koyal September 18, 2007, 8:15pm 16

Re: Mein Akser Tum Ko Khuwabo mein, Batana Bhool Jata Ho

thanks :)

Koyal September 19, 2007, 11:25am 17

Re: Mein Akser Tum Ko Khuwabo mein, Batana Bhool Jata Ho

thanks MG and welcome in my post

GuL-e-Tasbeeh September 19, 2007, 1:42pm 18

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kahaaN dekha hey mujhey kabhi nazar nahi aaya aesa Rose:-(

Koyal September 29, 2007, 1:31am 19

Re: Mein Akser Tum Ko Khuwabo mein, Batana Bhool Jata Ho

aik dafa kisi k leay order keay they asiay flowers :)

Daanie October 1, 2007, 9:50am 20

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buhut khoob :)

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